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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - squiggley1 - 11-02-2011
(11-02-2011, 20:04)Android Wrote: The comet is going to miss.
quiet you!
RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - Spammuff - 11-03-2011
Update: A set of revisions have been undertook, by me and the editors, allowing them to fix some of the errors themselves.
Also this has been posted on Ponychan fic training grounds for review (one of the most super review threads)
I'll hope to get alot of responses
-Nix_Spark
RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - Spammuff - 11-03-2011
Update: Image is being reworked, ( Found a problem with the spelling of Strength, when i spelt it as strenth.... FFFUUUU)
And i am probably going to create a desktop image for me tonight so some of the story editing will be left for the editors....
I cannot believe droid didn't point out my clearly visible spelling fail.
TSKTSK
RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - Android - 11-03-2011
You mean the one in that sentence? 'visible'?
RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - Spammuff - 11-03-2011
Wut you talking bout Willis?
RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - geckosquid - 11-04-2011
Spam, if you want, I can go through the story and completely wipe it of all grammatical errors. It would be my pleasure, and frankly, once I'm done with it, I doubt you'll need any more edits on it. I'm more than a little bit of a grammar freak.
RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - Spammuff - 11-04-2011
Please do... I swear I need all the Gnazies to rip this to hell, because there are so many errors...
At the moment I have a ToDo list with me and the editors, they will be working though all of the errors that are listed.
Ponychan haven't answered back, once they do the error list will be probably over 100 pages.
And then it will be perfect.
RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - Spammuff - 11-04-2011
Update: Captain Steve has took over the Reviewing from Ponychan...
I hope he posts a review soonish..
RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - partyars - 11-05-2011
Steven is reviewing this?
![[Image: LHjSe.gif]](http://i.imgur.com/LHjSe.gif)
It will be fabuloooooooooooooooooouuuuuuuus
RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - MainDigger - 11-05-2011
What is a "Captain Steve"? O.o