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RE: Pixel's Royal Application - Pixel - 04-03-2012

There you go.


RE: Pixel's Royal Application - Saera - 04-03-2012

You ended your background story with "he live in the woods". You did not continue on how he came upon Kiwike. You could simply add "He decided to move further away, and on his journey he stumbled upon a new land..." or the likes.

Once you do that you'll be whitelisted.


RE: Pixel's Royal Application - Pixel - 04-03-2012

Updated, please stop making me revise. Not English class okay. You know who I is.


RE: Pixel's Royal Application - Saera - 04-03-2012

Much better. Just because we know you doesn't mean we can make exceptions.

Welcome back to Kiwike.