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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - tristo999 - 11-02-2011
Tristo be soooo exitied
RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - squiggley1 - 11-02-2011
so they need an army hmmm? You know... I happen to be the world's only noble mercenary captain
RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - Spammuff - 11-02-2011
Heh, I'm sure a leader will arise..
xD
RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - squiggley1 - 11-02-2011
you can always use some extra men
RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - sethd13 - 11-02-2011
SunSwirl opened his eyes, to Equestria and Canterlot. He knew where he was and Satrayah was stood with him, she was looking shadier and was twitching abit.
RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - Spammuff - 11-02-2011
Gotcha.
Tweaked that up a bit.
Update: I'm allowing two editors to join me in fixing the story.
There's gonna be alot of changing of the first two sheets, and alot of adding and moving.
Here's the thing i wasn't realizing how much i used commas and thus comma abuse is found alot in scene one and two.
"Scratch that, comma abuse EVERYWHERE"
Yes this is why we all hate commas.
(2 Day project working on fixing chapter one and prelude)
(3 Day project to work on fixing chapter two and one)
RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - Spammuff - 11-02-2011
Grabbed photoshop today:
![[Image: 2eK72.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/2eK72.jpg)
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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - partyars - 11-02-2011
Image isn't showing up.
RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - Android - 11-02-2011
The comet is going to miss.
RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - Spammuff - 11-02-2011
(11-02-2011, 20:04)Android Wrote: The comet is going to miss.
DONT POINT THAT OUT.....
Like I said, they just want a hug. Comet '&' Planet Love 4 life!