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Coled1997's Application - coled1997 - 04-04-2012
Minecraft Username: Coled1997
Previous RP experiences: Skyrim And Many other RP servers
Have you played on any other servers?:Yes I have I left Because Unfair treatment from admins and mods
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: Im not sure But All I know is that almost everything intrests me.
Character Info
Character Name: Legan_May
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle): Khulu Desert
Gender: Male
Age: 21
General Background Information:
Legan was your every day Normal Father And Husband Untill the Great War Started In the west. Legan was Drafted into the war by Force And Was forced to battle in mortal combat With the other Kingdoms. Legan Is dying inside with out being able to see his son or his lovely wife. One day Legan was in a Battle in the khulu desert. This battle Was just another day to a soldier but for legan this battle would change his life. He was Injured in his leg From an arrow His army was slaughtered and Legan lived only because he was smart enough to hide under A proturding sand dune in the desert. Legan is Now bleeding out and Trying to make it back to his home land which happens to be Across The entire world.
Physical Condition/Description: Legan Has brown Hair and Wears A Military Uniform For the East. He is injured in his Right Leg And May be Slowly Dying if Not treated.
Skin:
RE: Coled1997's Application - Saera - 04-04-2012
You might want to think of expanding on your story. Kiwike is a new world, hence there aren't any nation/towns formed yet, hence no soldiers serving any kings on Kiwike. However, if those solders actually dragged your character all the way to Kiwike and dumped him there, then I might accept that, if you can further expand on your story.
You also need to post your skin. Read up the format to see how to.