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Application - bvcxzmn - bvcxzmn - 05-04-2012
General
Minecraft Name: bvcxzmn
Previous RP experiences: Star Wars the Old Republic, Skyrim, various other things. Most of my role playing is with single player games, but I am very mature nonetheless.
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: I haven't left the other servers I play on. I currently play on a total of 4 public servers and 2 private servers.
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: The kiwiships look awesome, but the role play seems epic as well.
How did you hear about Kiwike: I know geckosquid personally.
Character
Character Name: Torkin Orui
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle): Khulu Desert
Gender: male
Age: 52
General Background Information: After the fall of the republic, Torkin Orui was one of the few surviving Jedi. He was lucky enough to not be with any clones when order 66 was executed. After the order was issued Torkin was notified that the republic had fallen, so he fled away from all systems that were once part of the republic. He decided that he needed to go to a system that the empire had no chance of finding him in, one that they didn't even know about. The Minecraft system! Torkin must be careful while on the planet Minecraft, no one on the planet knows of alien life, he must not reveal the truth about the galaxy as to not cause commotion, and to avoid detection by the empire. He must start from scratch when he lands on the planet, leaving no evidence that he is from another world.
Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character): Is a human, has a white beard, wears Jedi robes, and always carries a concealed light saber (will be a diamond sword with sharpness and fire aspect when I get one), can use the powers of the force but not on Minecraft or he risks detection.
What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: To live a selfless life for the greater good while in exile.
Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description):
![[Image: bvcxzmn.png]](http://kiwike.se/skin/bvcxzmn.png)
RE: Application - bvcxzmn - iDieForEXP - 05-04-2012
The thing is... This a roleplaying server, not a fan-fiction server. You could possibly use a Jedi, but your story would have to be completely original and creative. You also need to post how your character found his way to Kiwike.
RE: Application - bvcxzmn - bvcxzmn - 05-04-2012
(05-04-2012, 09:02)iDieForEXP Wrote: The thing is... This a roleplaying server, not a fan-fiction server. You could possibly use a Jedi, but your story would have to be completely original and creative. You also need to post how your character found his way to Kiwike.
I was still editing the application, now it's finished.
RE: Application - bvcxzmn - iDieForEXP - 05-04-2012
It's still... kinda... fan-fictiony...
RE: Application - bvcxzmn - bvcxzmn - 05-04-2012
How about now?
RE: Application - bvcxzmn - Saera - 05-04-2012
It would be as simple as changing the name of the character, and not use existing characters (Obi Wan, Luke, etc.) I may let the part go with the Darth Vader training the Ender Dragon.
RE: Application - bvcxzmn - bvcxzmn - 05-05-2012
(05-04-2012, 16:52)Saera Wrote: It would be as simple as changing the name of the character, and not use existing characters (Obi Wan, Luke, etc.) I may let the part go with the Darth Vader training the Ender Dragon.
Obi Wan is my signature skin, and it's pretty obvious that it's Obi Wan. But I see what you mean if people are going to be addressing me by that in game... I'll change it to something more original. I haven't decided what it is going to be, but I'll update it soon. Thanks for the feedback.
I completely redid my story. I hope you like it.
RE: Application - bvcxzmn - Saera - 05-05-2012
Very much better.
Welcome to Kiwike.