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chugga1time Application EDIT 4 - chugga1time - 07-18-2012
Minecraft Username: Chugga1time
Previous RP experiences: skyrim
Character Info
Character Name: curse Bot
Spawn Location icenfjord
Gender: male
Age: Robots have no age
General Background Information
I was created by a engineer that wanted to never do anything again so he built me and I served him. One day one of his machines explodes killing him and and berrying me under ground then I was found 500 years later in a creek bed by a little boy. The little boy came back the day after he found me and activated me in shear terror the little boy ran away. I tried to move with even with my limbs rusty from years of water flowing over me. After I had found my way out of the river i proceeded to a nearby fortress icenfjord were I found an engineer to help me. The engineer fix my components and my limbs making it easier to move after the engineer was done with me I made my way to the door to explore Kiwike and all its nations.
Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character):
A bronze mossy robot with a cracked eye piece.
What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: To find a place that I am excepted were People don't look down on robots.
Picture of your minecraft skin:http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/steampunk-scuba-moving-head-round-head-scuba-diver-series/
RE: chugga1time Application - theonedoctor - 07-18-2012
I dont understand your backround
I dont understand your backround
RE: chugga1time Application EDIT - ivorybloodsh3d - 07-18-2012
definitely need work, give more background. How did you find kiwike, stuff like that. It is very under detailed
RE: chugga1time Application EDIT 2 - chugga1time - 07-18-2012
I revised it check it out should be better than before
RE: chugga1time Application EDIT 2 - spenboy - 07-18-2012
um, it needs more work i believe, saera, yel at me if i'm wrong, but um, he met people at kiwike? who? and how'd he find kiwike?
RE: chugga1time Application EDIT 2 - chugga1time - 07-18-2012
I edited it should be great now
RE: chugga1time Application EDIT 2 - chugga1time - 07-18-2012
Fixed check it out :smile:
RE: chugga1time Application EDIT 2 - theonedoctor - 07-18-2012
Not much better
RE: chugga1time Application EDIT 2 - chugga1time - 07-18-2012
I will work on it
RE: chugga1time Application EDIT 3 - chugga1time - 07-19-2012
I have improved my background and it should have more detail and a better story hope you read it Saera
I have added even more detail hope your read it saera