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ant97mester123 apply - ant97mester123 - 07-30-2012

General

Minecraft Name: ant97mester123
Previous RP experiences: no
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: minecaste , DrunkenSlug , truntetrop.se
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: Figthing and building
How did you hear about Kiwike: or11

Character

Character Name: John smith
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle): icenfjord
Gender: male
Age: 16

General Background Information: I growed up in a farm,whit my daddy mom and two sisters . Mom and my two sister staid at home and maked dinner and cleaned the house for us, when me and dad was lumberjackers .I loved to hear on daddys stories he told me a story about my grandfather that he was a great fighter. One day i got my grandfather suit it was a ninja suit, the same day did i move to get money for my family.Then i met or11 he paid me to work for him.

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character): I have a Ninja skin whit a diamond sword on my back, and i have a black mask and a black suit.

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: Be like me grandfather

Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description):
[Image: ant97mester123.png]


RE: ant97mester123 apply - sethd13 - 07-30-2012

GRAMMAR NAZI BOMBERS INCOMING!


RE: ant97mester123 apply - Saera - 07-31-2012

The story did not seem to flow. There aren't much details regarding the backstory of your character, your objective seems too simple. And your grammar doesn't help overall either.

Please redo your application, read other accepted applications to see what standards we expect.


RE: ant97mester123 apply - ant97mester123 - 07-31-2012

(07-30-2012, 15:34)ant97mester123 Wrote: General

Minecraft Name: ant97mester123
Previous RP experiences: yes
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: minecaste , DrunkenSlug , truntetrop.se
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: I like to Figth and build nice stuff Laugh
How did you hear about Kiwike: or11 and lordgodfrey Laugh

Character

Character Name: Ant Smith

[i][u]Gender:
male
Age: 16

General Background Information: My name is Ant Smith. I lived with my family and parents on a farm. My father told me a lot about a clan that his grandparents had started . He told me that the clan was called assasins my cousin Pabeck was the leader of the clan now, my father told me much about my grandfather that he was a great fighter and had a assasin suite. One day I was with a river close to the farm, there i saw a hole in the ground, in the hole there was a chest, inside of the chest there was a assasin suite, I brought it to the farm. I showed the suit to my father, he took it from me. He complained that there were ninja stars on it and I could hurt myself with it. Later that day I stole it back.One day my cousin and friend pabeck was leaving the town, to countinue to be a leader of the clan. I was allowed to follow him. We traveled for several days, the 10th day we found the land Kiwike!

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character): I have a Ninja skin with a diamond sword on my back, and I have a black mask and a black suit.

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: Be like me grandfather

Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description):
[Image: ant97mester123.png]

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RE: ant97mester123 apply - ant97mester123 - 07-31-2012

Fixed it!


RE: ant97mester123 apply - Saera - 08-02-2012

Did he take the suit in the end? He looked as if he left without it. Sorry I'm really finnicky with details like that Azn


RE: ant97mester123 apply - ant97mester123 - 08-05-2012

I fixed that detail



RE: ant97mester123 apply - Saera - 08-05-2012

Welcome to Kiwike.