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Application - FunnyCop
04-04-2012, 18:15, (This post was last modified: 04-04-2012, 23:20 by CthulhuMan.)
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Application - FunnyCop
General

Minecraft Name: FunnyCop
Previous RP experiences: Kiwike, other MC servers, and short RP stories.
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: Yes, I just couldn't resist Kiwike.
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: Custom mods, friendly people, and the RP.
How did you hear about Kiwike: My friends.

Character

Character Name: FunnyCop
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle): Icenfjord
Gender: Male
Age: 36

General Background Information: Space marine, worked undercover in deep space night clubs to expose drug trafficking. He was caught in a fire during a mission so he refuses to show his face in public. Retired early but accepted jobs from the HQ. A mission came up to escort the heir to the CSFP to Altarnius, the Archprice's home planet. Being one of the most experienced and trusted marines he was given the job. While he was escorting the Archprince the ship was hijacked. The captain, the Acrchprince and FunnyCop escaped on an escape pod and landed on Kiwike. His real name is not known, FunnyCop is a nickname given to him by his coworkers.

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character): Strong, well built, a little muscular. Wears a suit and mask.

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: Return home, deliver the Archprince to safety, and get some peace in his retirement.

Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description):
[Image: skin.php?FunnyCop]
04-04-2012, 18:23, (This post was last modified: 04-04-2012, 18:23 by Leech.)
Post: #2
RE: Whitelist Application
FunnyCop, trying to not be the devil's advocate, but you may want to expand on your physical description and main objective. Otherwise, can't wait for you to come back to Kiwike
Smiley
FunnyCop, trying to not be the devil's advocate, but you may want to expand on your physical description and main objective. Otherwise, can't wait for you to come back to Kiwike
Smiley

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04-04-2012, 18:31,
Post: #3
RE: Whitelist Application
(04-04-2012, 18:23)Leech Wrote: FunnyCop, trying to not be the devil's advocate, but you may want to expand on your physical description and main objective. Otherwise, can't wait for you to come back to Kiwike
Smiley
FunnyCop, trying to not be the devil's advocate, but you may want to expand on your physical description and main objective. Otherwise, can't wait for you to come back to Kiwike
Smiley

Done, I'm working on a website for a group I'm in. I'm having a hard time doing this and that at the same time haha.

04-04-2012, 19:56,
Post: #4
RE: Whitelist Application
Space. Yeah. I tried it, doesnt make any since with kiwike:/ So I went to a king storyLaugh



04-04-2012, 20:24,
Post: #5
RE: Whitelist Application
(04-04-2012, 19:56)asdfasdflkjty911 Wrote: Space. Yeah. I tried it, doesnt make any since with kiwike:/ So I went to a king storyLaugh

because having 40 kings showing up within 8 square kilometers is completely realistics.. Grin

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04-04-2012, 20:54,
Post: #6
RE: Whitelist Application
(04-04-2012, 19:56)asdfasdflkjty911 Wrote: Space. Yeah. I tried it, doesnt make any since with kiwike:/ So I went to a king storyLaugh

The space story works fine for me, and my story is shared with FunnyCop, Archprince, Or11, and Seandragon123

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04-04-2012, 21:22, (This post was last modified: 04-04-2012, 21:51 by Saera.)
Post: #7
RE: Whitelist Application
Could you flesh out your story a little more. Maybe explain about the Archprince a little and where the ship is heading. You kinda skipped over a sentence about HQ assigning you the job to escort the Archprince, which would make more sense for the story.
Your application Thread should be "Application - FunnyCop"

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04-04-2012, 23:21,
Post: #8
RE: Application - FunnyCop
Added more detail about the Archprince.
04-05-2012, 01:37,
Post: #9
RE: Application - FunnyCop
That'll do good sir.

Welcome to Kiwike.

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