Application - martin9123

[Martin9123]

Minecraft Name: martin9123
Previous RP experiences: nothing
Have you played on any other servers? minecaste mineology minefire
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: rp
How did you hear about Kiwike: Trough or11

Character

Character Name: pompibeard call me pomp
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle): Icenfjord
Gender: Male
Age: 22

General Background Information: were born on planet called planet 300046775 it were a very small planet very grey it had tons of lava lakes and it grows mushroom, we used the mushroom to build houses and weapon. We had a hidden weapon storage. My dad always told me about the war. He trained me to a fight i didnt know why he always talked about a war until i where 20 my town got attacked by alien. We were fighting but they were to strong i can not stop thinking on how big they were. They were made by stone mushroom where growing on them, me and my father wass the only one alive. He helped me down in the bunker his father had been making . there were just one capsule again my father throwed me in the capsule and he closed the door and punched the fire button
next day i woke in the land kiwike there were different plants lakes that doesn't kill you. I walked out in the lake looking up and thinking on how little im really are. I walked out of the lake i didnt have the mud on me anymore that was very great feeling, i built a shelter out of the capsule but then the night comed i saw skeleton's spider's zombie's creeper and worst of all a endermann, he sneaked up on me ,and i looked in he's eyes and he attacked me then i dont remember something then i waked up in a bed there it were a endermann i screamed and trying to get out of the bed but he tolled my that he doesent were wild like the other enderman's on the planet and about the crash on css ageous
we got very fast good friends and that how i met or11

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character): im a blue alien with a big mouth and weird eye's

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: i want to drive up and try to save daddy before its toolate
Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description):

[squiggley1]

OH CHRIST BROKEN ENGLISH

[Saera]

You got to work on the flow of the story. Its quite hard to follow. Also, you could add in details of your original home, what are your people, also explain more about the aliens that attacked (ie. who are they, why would they attack your home?)

Also, you should use or11's character name, unless that's really his rp character's name.

[Martin9123]

i improved it and yep his rp name is or11

[Saera]

You didn't have to make a new thread. But nevermind that.
It looks better now.

Welcome to Kiwike.

Also, if you haven't done so, post your application at http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1135...ry13972356 as well.