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Application - VirtuousStorm
04-08-2012, 07:09, (This post was last modified: 04-08-2012, 18:05 by VirtuousStorm.)
Post: #1
Application - VirtuousStorm
General

Minecraft Name:VirtuousStorm
Previous RP experiences:I have played Fallout 3, Fallout New Vegas, The Elder Scrolls:IV, The Elder Scrolls V, Sacred 2, and of course, Minecraft.
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?:I have played on one other server and I left because this one really appealed to me with the towns, nations, wars and ages.
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?:I am most interested in the idea of being able to have wars with other nations in this game because it seems like a load of fun. Being able to control a town is also amazing.
How did you hear about Kiwike:I heard about Kiwike because my good friend had convinced me to try to join it.

Character

Character Name:Stratomis
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle):Orraku Fields
Gender:Male
Age:37

General Background Information: Many centuries ago, a baby boy, named Stratomis was born in a small, poor village, called Solin in a dense rainforest. The village that he was born in had many brave men who were willing to protect and defend, however, they were also starving and struggling to stay alive. There was a precious, but fragile subsistence economy in this village and without it, they would all perish. The very moment when Stratomis was born, he had a stone cold look on his face. He didn't cry and had no emotions whatsoever. By age 2, he was able to sprint effortlessly. By age 3, he was able to hunt small critters that lurked near the river. He was also able to talk a small variety of phrases. By age 7, he mastered his athletic skills in hunting and he was able to speak fluently. And by age 15, Stratomis was able to lead his village in ridding hunger and poverty. He made various tools for the huntsman and even cooked every once in a great while. He was the favorite of the whole village. When Stratomis was 20, he was doing some solo hunting to cool his nerves after his father, Siloquis, had died from a hunting accident. He blamed the entirety of the situation on himself and the villages' pride of Stratomis was deeply hurt. A few days later, a rival tribe had launched a fully premeditated invasion on Solin, who was unprepared for such power. The entire village was killed in less than 10 minutes. Stratomis was the only survivor. He fought the remaining rival tribe off partially and had to flee. He escaped partially wounded. The only life changing wound he suffered from was that there was little value in life for him, as his family and village was slaughtered. He searched for a new start. He didn't know where he was going, but he went on a journey to find himself and the land of Kiwike. His father had told him stories about Kiwike. Those were the only stories that seemed to put a smile on Stratomis' face. He endured harsh weather and fierce fiends on his way to Kiwike. After 17 years, he finally found it. As he made his way closer, he unexpectedly collapsed. He woke up days later and found himself in the Orraku Fields. He was the bravest, most skillful hunter and a gifted leader. But he would do anything to dominate the world.

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character):Stratomis is a buff male who is average in height. He has black hair with the letter "S" inscribed on the back and sides of his head. One "S" for the name Stratomis, one for Solin, his hometown. and one for his father's name, Siloquin. The "S" are cyan. He wears a checkered uniform in the colorsd dark blue, cyan, grayish-blue and a little light-blue. His eyes are stained red with the blood-shed he witnessed during the massacre of his village. His hair is pitch black.

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?:Stratomis wishes to create a town in memory of the fallen Solin. However, he wants to dominate the world as the greatest force ever. Due to the loss of his family, he will show no mercy to accomplish this goal.

Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description):
[Image: VirtuousStorm.png]
04-08-2012, 07:21,
Post: #2
RE: Application - VirtuousStorm
Bahaha I love it! Welcome Stratomis!
04-08-2012, 12:54,
Post: #3
RE: Application - VirtuousStorm
Seems like a solid story.
The only small thing i would like you to change is the fact that he single handedly defeated an entire rebel tribe after they had killed the village in under 10 minutes. And seeing you are stating the village have capable brave man it makes it only less that a boy the age of 20 whipes out a tribe like that.

I'm fine with you chasing a small force off but this goes a little over the top
04-08-2012, 18:07,
Post: #4
RE: Application - VirtuousStorm
Thanks for the feedback! I tweaked it up a bit about the village attack. Thanks!
04-08-2012, 18:10,
Post: #5
RE: Application - VirtuousStorm
Sounds better now. its still quite hard to beleave but i'm sure it makes a nice inn story to talk about with some beer Wink

consider yourself accepted.
Welcome to kiwike
04-08-2012, 18:22,
Post: #6
RE: Application - VirtuousStorm
Also, if you haven't, post your application at http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1135...ry13972356 as well.

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