Application for pinkbunny222 [Edited]

[pinkbunny222]

[i][u]Minecraft Name: pinkbunny222
[i][u]Previous RP experiences: Kiwike 2.0, MasterCraft, Betacraft
[i][u]Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: I played on Kiwike 2.0, and MasterCraft. I left because they got a little stale. I left Kiwike because it closed after the update.
[i][u]What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: I think I'm most interested in being in a server, and being able to build with other people, and join a town.
[i][u]How did you hear about Kiwike: ksupwns33, MasterCreate66 told me in Kiwike 2.0.

Character

[i][u]Character Name: Paul James
[i][u]Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle): Khulu Desert
[i][u]Gender: Male
[i][u]Age: 23

[i][u]General Background Information: Paul started off in a small world. He lived in a town that had to survive off the lands, with nothing but the desert surrounding the small village. But, one day, a man with horns coming out of his helmet, came and wreaked havoc upon the land. He shouted in a strange tongue no one could understand, and destroyed houses with his voice. Meanwhile, Paul was exploring a new found cave off in a nearby mountain. He heard screams of terror coming from the village. He sprinted down the mountain, leaving a trail of dust behind him. When he got to the the village, the stranger was running towards him. Paul ran at him with his mighty sword, but his strength was not great enough to match the mans shouts. He was wounded heavily and passed out from blood loss. He awoke in a dark cave with a strange light surrounding him. There was a rose. And beside it, was a note that said, "Just do what comes naturally." He new the gods had given him another chance. He would not waste it. Now, he comes to Kiwike to gain strength, and train to kill the man that ruined his life. He seeks friendship and trust, to find his way. He will train, and he will not fail.

[i][u]Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character): He wears a green backback, and a white hat. And with him, he always carries a rose. Blue shorts and a blue shirt his is choice of clothes.

[i][u]What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: To train and to seek friendship. He wants to be part of a team, like his old village.

[i][u]Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description): https://lh6.googleusercontent.com/-kzlQq...1/Mike.png

[Cerce]

Other than the fact that you forgot to close the majority of your tags, this looks pretty adequate to me. Hope you get accepted.

[geckosquid]

Please make your name something more real. Other than that, you did a great job! Also, it would be awesome if you could post your application here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1135...ge__st__80

[Saera]

Done.

Welcome to Kiwike.