Application - Marqui

[AndroD]

General

Minecraft Name:Marqui
Previous RP experiences:Blockland,Return to Blockland
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?:CorruptionCraft I started to hated getting free killed, nobody was even trying to make some attempt at being mature.
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?:Exploration and having a actual charecter
How did you hear about Kiwike:Yottabyte on steam

Character

Character Name:Sharath
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle):Khulu Desert
Gender:Male
Age:102

General Background Information: Being half human half elemental after escaping from the volcanic elemental plane after chaos broke loose scarifcing eternal life and power for the safety of the volcanic planes residents after hordes of Demons invaded the planes with thier overwhelming magic they summoned the Undead which led a mighty battle in the Volcanic plane city of Emberclysm. The Hordes of Undead and Demons marched and faught all the way into the Heart of the Kingdom where they met King Sharath. Sharath put up a valiant fight. But was heavily outnumbered. They wanted the power of the Volcanar elementals which Sharath devoted his life to protect since they are his people.

He had to make a offering with the Demons so they would call of the Undead. He had to hand over his elemental powers the essence that made him Immortal to keep his people safe. But it was a planned attack in his mind. When he unleashed his power it sent a wave of fiery destruction throughout the Planes Wiping out most of the Demons and the Undead! His people told him to flee this realm as the remaining Demons are gathering in thier masses and will kill Sharath since he is no longer Immortal! The Volcanarians of Emberclysm shall hold of the unendeing armies of Demons. They pray for the day thier leader will return...

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character):A proud elemental body blazing with bodily flames in a human form. Clothing is not really effective on the body as it just burns. Many dark patches are shown as scars on the body.

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?:Rebuilding his name as the Volcanic Lord. Keeping the world safe from the same Demons and Undead that ravaged his home and cost him everything dear to his heart. His dream is to return to the Volcanic Planes and reclaim the throne that his people loved him for and make one last stand against the armies of the damned regardless if he is a Mortal!

Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description):

[Riskae]

You definitely need to elaborate on your background some more. What caused the chaos? Why was it kiwike that you came to? Why did he have to sacrifice his eternal life to save them? You also should give a more defined goal as well. I like where your going and I think you could have a really cool character if you just elaborate a little. Anyway, good luck getting white listed.

[CapBubba]

I agree. You have the basics for a great character, but you just need to expand and add details. Other than that you look like you have a fantastic character there.

[AndroD]

Updated

[MainDigger]

Accepted! Welcome to Kiwike!