Character Application

[Rosie]

General

Minecraft Name: Demonxerov2
Previous RP experiences: A couple of servers here and there.
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: I’ve played a few, left for personal disliking.
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: Interesting and unique RP.
How did you hear about Kiwike: Friend

Character

Character Name: Dynasty
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle): Icenjord
Gender: Male
Age: 24

General Background Information:

Dynasty had a rough childhood as his parents would never pay attention to him, allowing him to make some bad friends and worse role models. He first got a knife from one of his gang mates, an old rusty shank to be specific, and was told to practice with it before he was to get a real weapon. He used it every day since then on trees, walls, training dummies and other things he could find. Eventually, he got enough respect from the others to be given a real weapon. A small knife with a sharpened tip, obviously meant for stabbing. He smiled at the gift, keeping it with him until he grew older and the knife wore out.
Having learned a bit over his years, he visited his aunt Bethina only to see the abuse and hate she had to put up with. The Flay, a group of bandits, decided to visit and beat Dynasty severely for being the “least favored”. They then proceeded to take a club and beat Bethina, or atleast that was what Dynasty heard before he ran. The only things going through his mind was Rosie’s, mother's and Bethina’s condition; As well as delivering the vengeance that people have been waiting for.


Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character): A toned dark elven man, his skin is a darker shade of gray. White hair, kind of groomed. He has a left pink eye and a right red one. He wears a sort of dark pink vest over his white shirt with grayish pants. He wears black gloves with a gold clip and a pair of goggles on his head. His eyes seem to always be tired for some reason.

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: Simply to live a happy life with a love and kids.

Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description):

[Riskae]

Seems a bit disjointed, I can't always tell who your pronouns are referring to. Is Bethina the lover? You may want to reread it and clarify some parts, other than that you seem to have a good foundation and with some minor edits you'd be good to go.

[Saera]

Cool sig btw Riskae, very nice I like it.

And yes, that's pretty much the feedback I had in mind for your picture. You'll have to keep track of where your story is going, and of which characters you are talking about.

[sethd13]

Hasn't it been that for a while ?

[Saera]

Welcome to Kiwike.