TheConjurer's Whitelist Application

[TheConjurer]

General

Minecraft Name: TheConjurer
Previous RP experiences: Sins of Our Fathers Fallout RP Server, I am admin on this server and have been for a month now, before admin I was moderator, before Moderator I was a player, I have played for two and a half months on the server.
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: Yes, Fallout Sins of Our Father's Server, I still play the server, decided to try something new though.
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: The Medieval/Fantasy theme.
How did you hear about Kiwike: A friend of mine, who knows Mystia_Lorlei, which I had played Sin's of our Fathers with.

Character

Character Name: Kiroyoshi Kajitani
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle): Icenfjord
Gender: Male
Age: 19

General Background Information: Kiroyoshi and his twin sister Miyuki, both lived in a manor which had burnt down at the age of 9 which was an act of arson, the criminal unknown. Both having been the only to escape fled by random, ending up in the snowy region of Icenfjord. Through the long venture to reach Icenfjord he had toughened himself to traveling, although not being a big fan of fire prefers to camp without fire and to not cook and only live off of whatever he could gather. Now at the age of 19 Kiroyoshi plan's to stick with his twin sister until the end. Kiroyoshi, knowing he must protect his sister with all of his being, even if it means he would need to take on the largest of his fears. After several different types of training with various weapons, Kiroyoshi favored the bow in all. He took up the bow with pride and swore that the bow within his hands would used only to protect his twin sister.

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character): Kiroyoshi wears a set of Light grey robes with leather padding here and there, as well as a hood over his head which does not droop over his eyes. Kiroyoshi has bright red eyes, although look dark with his hood's shadow cast upon them. His skin a pale white, as well as his hair is a light brown. Kiroyoshi's physic is not of a muscular man. He is more along the lines of ranged weaponry such as a bow and arrow, or even Conjuration magic in which he would be considered (Skyrim Terms) Novice, and still learning much.

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: Kiroyoshi's main objective is to ensure his sister's safety and happiness is put at the highest peak of any mountain that imagination could possibly think of. Miyuki is Kiroyoshi's sole purpose of survival, and sanity out in the land.

Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description):

[partyars]

The background story is really, really short and doesn't really tell anything. Try to flesh it out a bit, add why and/or how your manor burnt down for example.

The rest of the application seems good to me.

[Cerce]

Yea, the other app had at least the explenation of memory loss. This one seems a bit too cut and dry.

[Saera]

Myes, and once you make the changes to your story, don't forget to post your application at http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1135...d__st__280

[TheConjurer]

Alright I updated the story, and sorry about the whole short and choppy sentence I had made. Making these things at 4 a.m. really is a bad idea.

[partyars]

Seems good to me, all that you need to do now is to copy your application on this thread over on the minecraft forums and you're in.

Accepted, locking this now.

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