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Appilcation- RetroVillan
10-05-2012, 00:53, (This post was last modified: 10-05-2012, 22:45 by RetroVillan.)
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Minecraft Name: RetroVillan
Previous RP experiences: I’ve been on a few rp severs here and there not a lot of names i remember accept vox populi
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: I left some of those other severs because i didn’t feel the rp vibe that I like and I’m hoping to find what i want in a rp sever here.
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: I'm interested in the lock picking and the instances i would like to see how that works
How did you hear about Kiwike: um i was strolling through the forums and stumbled onto this place.

Character

Character Name:
Ivo Lanchester
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle): Khulu Desert
Gender: Female
Age: 27

General Background Information: Ivo is an offspring of a fire elemental and a crazed wizard who thought she was an elemental herself more like she was mental anyway she spent 2 years trying to summon the aspects of fire she succeeded and she got what she wanted an element of fire but her father was a trickster just like the piece of nature he is made of. He tricked her mother into bearing him a child killing her in the process and freeing him from her control thus Ivo was born. Having no tie with the magical realm except here elemental roots and her mother being burnt to that of a pile of ashes she was left to fend for herself in this harsh world. Through the years Ivo has grown to know this world for the cruel and crimeful nature that lies beneath the large beautiful cities. Each moment she was there she loved it the crime the theft the murder the hatred it was what filled her with the warm ember of a fire and the burning evil of a forest fire that consumes all….. in short she was an evil teenager still not able to make contact with the elemental plane and use her abilities yet she was content with small burnings of houses and woodland creatures from rabbits to wolves sometimes a zombie or two when she got really bored but it was not till she set fire to the chief of the village at the age of 19 by then of course she had progressed to more … intense burnings shall we say. That she was able to find a connection (after being exiled from the village) with the plane of elements and control fire after she discovered her powers she set the village ablaze till nothing was left except the smoldering ashes of the rundown village. After a villainous (Buwahahahaha ! )laughter she was ambushed by a creeper. Blowing her up and knocking away her memories of the connection with the elemental plane she so longed for. Waking up 2 days later she remembered nothing of how to use her elemental powers but only how to restore them and get back her powers making that her one and only goal she set off.

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character): Ivo wears a golden red and dark red armor that covers her mid torso and back she wears black trousers with reddish gold highlights she has black hair with orange highlights she has two emblems on the sides of her head she has violet red eyes and she has flames ascending from her hands up her arms. She likes the brightness of the sunny mornings but hates to go near water or snowy places she loves to be underground with lava especially.

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: Ivo wishes to gain the ability to join the elemental plane with her father and be one with the elementals again.

Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description):
[Image: Retrovillan.png]
10-05-2012, 01:12,
Post: #2
RE: Appilcation- RetroVillan
Alright, but definitly could use some work. Maybe a period every once in a while? And how did Ivo get to/ find Kiwike? Some things to think about if you want accepted.

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10-05-2012, 03:22,
Post: #3
RE: Appilcation- RetroVillan
umm you will need to change around your general background i got confused. Also you need to use proper grammar nowadays
10-05-2012, 03:50,
Post: #4
RE: Appilcation- RetroVillan
First off, Welcome to Kiwike! I know you'll have a wonderful time here. Now about the application. A few things I would suggest is to 1) Use much more punctuation and capitalization in your backstory, and 2) Make the back story longer. Everybody here enjoys a good read, and we're sorely in need of some entertainment xD. I suppose the final thing I'd like to let you know, is that our server is going through a process of sorts. We're splitting our one server in two, with one side more focused on roleplay. I'm pretty sure the server is still up, so you can play in the meantime, but I'm afraid you may not see much of our community except for the forums. Please stick around in the mean time, I promise we'll have more information for everyone soon.
10-05-2012, 22:46,
Post: #5
RE: Appilcation- RetroVillan
Added alot more story hope you guys like it oh and i will also be putting up a full rp bio of Ivo when i have time Laugh
10-05-2012, 23:03,
Post: #6
RE: Appilcation- RetroVillan
I like it!
10-05-2012, 23:16,
Post: #7
RE: Appilcation- RetroVillan
Accepted. Welcome to Kiwike!

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