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Pixel's Royal Application
04-03-2012, 01:13,
Post: #11
RE: Pixel's Royal Application
There you go.

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04-03-2012, 02:44,
Post: #12
RE: Pixel's Royal Application
You ended your background story with "he live in the woods". You did not continue on how he came upon Kiwike. You could simply add "He decided to move further away, and on his journey he stumbled upon a new land..." or the likes.

Once you do that you'll be whitelisted.

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04-03-2012, 03:15,
Post: #13
RE: Pixel's Royal Application
Updated, please stop making me revise. Not English class okay. You know who I is.

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04-03-2012, 03:22,
Post: #14
RE: Pixel's Royal Application
Much better. Just because we know you doesn't mean we can make exceptions.

Welcome back to Kiwike.

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