Application - or11

[or11]

General

Minecraft Name: or11
Previous RP experiences: WoW, kiwike 2.0
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: Mineology minefire
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: Map and war
How did you hear about Kiwike: from Lordgodfrey

Character

Character Name: Or11
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle): Icenfjord Gender: Male
Age:

General Background Information: Or11 teleported out of the spaceship CSS ageos at the last second before crash, he had been a engineer at CSS ageos spaceship fixing engines,elevators clocks and circuits and other redstone machines, there were some terrorist who had crashed the spaceship he were fixing some lamps when they where crashing, now his mission is too help leech and the other endermans making clever contraptions to help them survive in the land called, Kiwike!

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character): A black and tall enderman, wearing steel armor and a silk hoodie.

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: Be a engineer and and make a redstone company building complex redstone circuits

Picture of your minecraft skin:

[Naamandre3]

Background is to short. explain some of his life before the crash and some of his duties or things he did on the ship.

Description also is not enough. You have to describe his clothing does he still have his space suit? does he wear other clothing once in awhile etc etc.

Main objective like other. I do not think you're character does this out of charity he'll have a goal. to go back in space? to be famous in this new world. He already is a engineer and thus cannot strive to become one. so that needs a cleanup aswell

[or11]

Improved it.

[geckosquid]

The background is still lacking. Could you flesh it out a bit?

[or11]

Improved it

[geckosquid]

Could you elaborate more on what the CSS Ageos is?

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And how it crashed, as well.

[MainDigger]

The CSS Aegos is Leech's ship. He wrote all about it in his backstory

[geckosquid]

That information should still be included, as one app shouldn't rely on another. I'll accept this on that basis, however.

[or11]

improved it

[Saera]

So he's accepted then? Lock thread?