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Application - reneeliong
04-03-2012, 16:15, (This post was last modified: 04-04-2012, 00:13 by Renee.)
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Application - reneeliong
General

Minecraft Name: reneeliong
Previous RP experiences: A few servers
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: Its going under a total revamp so I am just seeing how the other RP servers are like
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: The Age System and the Stronghold dungeons
How did you hear about Kiwike: Forums browsing

Character

Character Name: Topaz Englazer
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle): Aridian Jungle
Gender: Female
Age: 19

General Background Information: First there was darkness, then light flashed all over. The light was not a kind one. It was one that kills. Fire spread throughout the forest. Little Topaz was tucked deeply in her mother's arms as they escaped the Castle they called home. Besieged by rebels, Topaz's mother rode the black stallion waiting outside the walls into the forest heading towards the docks where everyone was escaping too. Hot in pursuit, she dropped Topaz and she was lost into a Forest. Days later, the rebellion was taken down. Hundreds of men went into the huge forest to search for Topaz. No clue was found and it was believed she was dead.But she wasn't, she was found by a young forest couple who took her in as their child.

18 years has passed. Now in the age of 19, agile and aniti-social , she found herself mistrusting anyone she finds. Yet, she hunted down and had killed 2 of the old rebellions leaders yet her thirst for revenge had not been relinquished. She gets some information that the last one was hidden in a place Kiwike. Leaving the place where she was sheltered for 18 years, she set off on a ship. Upon reaching there, she finds out the information had been false and the next ship back was 2 months away. Cursing herself, she settles in the Inn and keeps herself away from locals as far as possible.


Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character): Pink haired girl with a white tunic. Has small teal colored eyes and a red satchel behind her

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: To find a new life and better home.

Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description):
[Image: reneeliong.png]
04-03-2012, 16:54,
Post: #2
RE: Application - reneeliong
Sounds great! Laugh

Hope you stay, even after youre old server gets "revamped". Oh, and you should fix youre skin picture, all you have to do is put youre minecraft name in the space where it says (yourenamehere) in the original format. It then places it as a photo.

Welcome to Kiwike!



04-03-2012, 17:25, (This post was last modified: 04-03-2012, 20:58 by Saera.)
Post: #3
RE: Application - reneeliong
It a solid enough story. However, it seems like your character already started out in Kiwike since the beginning. You might have to edit that. In addition, you have to come up with how your character stumble upon Kiwike.

Once you update your application, please post a reply so we can keep track.

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04-03-2012, 21:04,
Post: #4
RE: Application - reneeliong
Yes; as of now, Kiwike is not advanced enough to have systems of government, and thus rebellions are impossible. All you need to do is say that this happened in a neighboring land, and you're good to go!

Love,
Gecko
04-04-2012, 00:09,
Post: #5
RE: Application - reneeliong
Edited it. Sorry if you may see a wrong skin. I was using the one (if it is an assassin) to play on another server. I changed it already but don't know how long it will take to change
04-04-2012, 00:14, (This post was last modified: 04-04-2012, 00:16 by geckosquid.)
Post: #6
RE: Application - reneeliong
Great job. Accepted.
Oh, would you mind posting this on the Minecraft Forums as well? It helps with publicity a ton. Thanks! Here's the link for your convenience: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1135...ances-124/
The application, I mean.

Love,
Gecko
04-04-2012, 02:35,
Post: #7
RE: Application - reneeliong
Thread shall be locked in 3....2....1....

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