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Application for noahnoah711
04-05-2012, 04:35, (This post was last modified: 04-05-2012, 05:15 by spenboy.)
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Application for noahnoah711
General

Minecraft Name: noahnoah711
Previous RP experiences: kiwike 2.0
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: i have not played other servers
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: Building a grand city with my friends, and adding cool features to it
How did you hear about Kiwike: Seandragon123

Character

Character Name: Spencer
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle): Icenfjord
Gender: Male
Age: 22

General Background Information: Raised in the city, i found the luxury of friends. I had two of them. We put our all in our work, and made meager ammounts. Still, we had enough to fill our bars. But then, like so many times in my life, i lost everything. The building that we slept on top of burned to the ground. One of my friends died almost immiediately, the other tried to jump and missed the water. I was the only one who made it. I later found that it was a corrupt merchant, and i bided my time, and eventually killed him. My obsession ended, i looked for work. One day i was approached by a man wearing leather armor, carrying a diamond blade, who asked me to kill a man. i stealthily climbed and waited, then swooped down and killed the man. I then became an assassin. After a series of successful kills, i was sent for a high paying job, easy they said. They had me only bring a sword, no armor, and a companion.I should have been suspicious when he showed up wearing full iron armour, but i was arrogant. We followed the target, the chief of guards, out of the city. Then, my ally, sliced my leg, and belted out a scream before running into the woods. Four archers appeared from around trees, and at the captains command, shot me. I was hit three times. My left leg at the base, my lower chest on the right side, and mirror opposite of my heart. i was lucky that day, the fourth fired arrow sliced just brushing the back of my neck. I was carried unconscious to a spring, by a man in gold and leather armour, with a gold axe strapped to his side. He healed me, never saying a single word, and handed me his axe. I then boldly walked into the city, and in a single slice, killed the captain. I then ran, like never before, and after a trek of two days, i made it to the hideout i received jobs at. The man who had given me my first job was there, and my "ally", both shocked to see me, reached for weapons, but i gutted the betrayor, and sliced of the hand of the man in leather armour. i killed him, set fire to the building, the tool that had first hurt me, now helped my revenge. i returned to the city and turned myself in. After a year and three months in prison, i was released. i had observed my life in there. and chose a path that would forever change me. i travelled by boat and foot through deserts and sno, and found the land i have come to rest at. Kiwike. I believe that my change, was for the better.
Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character): strong, wiry, 5 foot 2, wears a white cloak that hides my face, red threads are on the cloak.

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: I wish to be a guard and help others achieve goals, like found towns, raise money, build castles.

Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description):
[Image: skin.php?noahnoah711]
04-05-2012, 04:48,
Post: #2
RE: Application for noahnoah711
Noah Prejean WaitAMinute ?

You wot?
04-05-2012, 04:53, (This post was last modified: 04-05-2012, 04:53 by Leech.)
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RE: Application for noahnoah711
You're going to want to expand on the general background. How did you get to Kiwike (There are no towns in Kiwike as of yet, so you must to have either come out of another land or have been raised in the wilderness)? What happened that caused you to get injured by this archer? Maybe specify on what kind of people you were killing

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04-05-2012, 05:12,
Post: #4
RE: Application for noahnoah711
i changed it up, and added more, thx leech, you helped alot.
04-05-2012, 05:34,
Post: #5
RE: Application for noahnoah711
Your story is a lot better now.

Welcome to Kiwike.

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