Application - toon13956824

[toon13956824]

Minecraft Name: toon13956824
Previous RP experiences: Kiwike 2.0, Elder Scrolls V skyrim
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: Yes, but i do not remember the names, mostly quit Because there was to manny lags.
What feature or Kiwike are you most interested in?: Awesome people, cool server ...
How did you hear about Kiwike: partyars

Character Name: toon13956824

Gender: male

Spawn Location Aridian Jungle

Age: 20

General Background Information:

once upon a time there was a guy,
with the code name toon13956824
He Grew up in a poor village
where he had to work hard
When he was 10, his village was Attacked by the most horrible creatures Such As
creepers, zombies, skeletons, ...
he, his family and friends Could escape to a cave where he lived eight years.
When he was discovered by an army and forced to fight They Were
Against the creatures.
he was the best and was soon Appointed to Captain,
war-hero.
1 year later there was a large creature with wings,
it was indestructible, he saw his friends, family
Death.
He tore a piece of his clothes and made ​​it red with blood,
or his family and friends,
and swore that one day he would take revenge and he disappeared
after days of walking,
he found a new country called kiwike.
hoping he would get a second chance.

Physical Condition / Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character):

two different eye colors,
a headband soaked with the blood of his friends and family
his clothes torn apart,
and his body covered in blood

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?:
lots of mining and building
helping people
and make a city or be asistand
hope this is good enough

Picture of your mine craft skin:

[Saera]

Appointed as captain when he was 12? I find that pretty hard to believe. Also, the age information is for your character, not yourself. I also doubt a 15 year old would be going around hunting dragons.

You can just edit your post instead of making a new thread.

[toon13956824]

is it okay if i just change the age?

General Background Information:

once upon a time there was a guy,
with the code name toon13956824
He Grew up in a poor village
where he had to work hard
When he was 10, his village was Attacked by the most horrible creatures Such As
creepers, zombies, skeletons, ...
he, his family and friends Could escape to a cave where he lived eight years.
When he was discovered by an army and forced to fight They Were
Against the creatures.
he was the best and was soon Appointed to Captain,
war-hero.
1 year later there was a large creature with wings,
it was indestructible, he saw his friends, family
Death.
He tore a piece of his clothes and made ​​it red with blood,
or his family and friends,
and swore that one day he would take revenge and he disappeared
after days of walking,
he found a new country called kiwike.
hoping he would get a second chance.

[Saera]

Ok, story looks good now. However, you forgot to change your age of 15. Based on your story, I'd say your character should be 20 years old or so.

You just need to edit your original post in this thread.

[toon13956824]

Appointed as captain when he was 12? I find that pretty hard to believe. Also, the age information is for your character, not yourself. I also doubt a 15 year old would be going around hunting dragons.

You can just edit your post instead of making a new thread.

Ok, story looks good now. However, you forgot to change your age of 15. Based on your story, I'd say your character should be 20 years old or so.

You just need to edit your original post in this thread.

i think it's ok now

[Saera]

Done.

Welcome to Kiwike.