application-harald1970

[pabeck]

General

Minecraft Name: harald1970
Previous RP experiences: nope
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: minecaste mineology
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: rp war
How did you hear about Kiwike: or11

Character

Character Name: Pabeck
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle): icenfjord
Gender: male
Age: 16

General Background Information: i grew up in a forest in a tree i did never see my dad or mom but my friends and my brother helped me out. I remember i was 12 and i was on a hunt, i killed my first bear and saved the day we walked happy home to the tree and had a nice meal. My brother began to train me and when the day i was that good enough my brother told that he had a clan with the friends and our dad was the leader of the clan before .But got killed now my brother was the clan leader of assasins. We were in a war with another clan and one day we were eating we got attacked by the enemy clan, we had no chance than to run my brother got killed that day im ran in three days and finally i reached the kingdom of Kiwike

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character): I have a purple suit with a purple bandana across my head.
What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this
experience of living?: To get stronge enough and get revenge for my brother and dad.
Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description):

[Saera]

I find it kind of hard to get the flow of the story. Could you improve a little on your structure of the story?

Also, don't forget to post at http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1135...ry13972356.

[pabeck]

Greatly improved!

[Saera]

Alright, last thing to do is to post at http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1135...d__st__120 then you can be whitelisted.

[Saera]

Welcome to Kiwike.