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Application- jdp1711
07-15-2012, 01:48, (This post was last modified: 07-15-2012, 02:53 by Cindella.)
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Application- jdp1711
General

Minecraft Name: jdp1711
Previous RP experiences: Skyrim
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: Yes i have played on other servers like raidcraft which i left because it turned anorchy, and the admins were not in control.
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: I am most interested in the role playing aspect of the game.
How did you hear about Kiwike: I heard about your server from one of my friends.

Character

Character Name: Cindella
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle): Orraku Fields
Gender: Female
Age: 18

General Background Information: I was raised on a small island just south of Orraku Fields. My father was a fisherman who was also born and raised on the island. My mother was born near Orraku Fields and raised as a farm girl. She herded the cattle and raised the crops. After some time my parents met on vacation in Aridian Jungle and new they had a spark. They got married only a month later. I was raised on the sea and am not to shabby at fishing and boating. When I got older I was the only girl on the island that competed against boys in boating. After some time i would take little adventures out by myself for a couple of months. On those adventures I would have to face the pirates gaurding smaller islands west of my little island. While trying to defend a nearby island i was hit from behind by an arrow an taken aboard. On the pirate ship i was captured and I found a treasure map leading to sunken treasure. When I escaped an archer shot an arrow through the middle of the map and I lost half of it. After that escape those pirates have gone into hiding. I must now find the pirates and seek my revenge while seeking the treasure.

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character): I am a 5'8 girl who has red hair. I wear pirate clothes. I am quite skinny

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: My characters objective is to find the sunken treasure. I want to join a nation and also help there.

Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description):
[Image: jdp1711.png]
07-15-2012, 02:09,
Post: #2
RE: Application- jdp1711
The map seems more like a 'why' you got here; not 'how' you got here. Also; many questions are left unanswered. Did you escape? Do you still have the map? Are the Pirates in Kiwike? Did you sail here, or did the pirates take you here against your will?

Other than that; seems legit.

"One can concentrate so closely on the words of a sentence that one thereby misses the meaning. As can happen in any area of life. You must never lose focus on the larger landscape."
07-15-2012, 02:26,
Post: #3
RE: Application- jdp1711
Perhaps you can clarify a little more on "On a pirate ship i was captured and I found a treasure map leading to sunken tresure". More details on that part of the story.

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07-15-2012, 03:04,
Post: #4
RE: Application- jdp1711
(07-15-2012, 02:26)Saera Wrote: Perhaps you can clarify a little more on "On a pirate ship i was captured and I found a treasure map leading to sunken tresure". More details on that part of the story.
hopefully i clarified that because i really want to join

07-15-2012, 03:18,
Post: #5
RE: Application- jdp1711
"On the pirate ship i was captured and I found a treasure map leading to sunken treasure. When I escaped an archer shot an arrow through the middle of the map and I lost half of it. After that escape those pirates have gone into hiding. I must now find the pirates and seek my revenge while seeking the treasure."

Nice.

She also has red hair. Saera, let her in pwease :3

"One can concentrate so closely on the words of a sentence that one thereby misses the meaning. As can happen in any area of life. You must never lose focus on the larger landscape."
07-15-2012, 03:26, (This post was last modified: 07-15-2012, 03:31 by Cindella.)
Post: #6
RE: Application- jdp1711
thanks
(07-15-2012, 02:09)Cerce Wrote: The map seems more like a 'why' you got here; not 'how' you got here. Also; many questions are left unanswered. Did you escape? Do you still have the map? Are the Pirates in Kiwike? Did you sail here, or did the pirates take you here against your will?

Other than that; seems legit.
thanks i took that into conceteration hopefully you like it now

07-15-2012, 07:05,
Post: #7
RE: Application- jdp1711
It is much better now that the ending has been clarified. And I presume seeking the pirates led you to Kiwike.

Welcome to Kiwike.

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