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[trenten4398]

Minecraft Name: trenten4398
Previous RP experiences: yes, many
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: peanutcraft, it was shutdown
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: kiwiships
How did you hear about Kiwike: through brave_toaster34 my friend

Character

Character Name: Trent
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle): Icenfjord
Gender: male
Age: 21

General Background Information: Growing up as a small boy was hard, whenever the clanbags would attack i would always be the one who wasnt allowed to go outside and fight them. My dream was to go out and kill a fierce clanbag so i could brag to the whole nation that i wasnt weak, but i never had that chance. I knew one day i might get that special chance so i prepared for it. I created a potion that would make me big and strong, I would only use it when i was outside and fighting the clanbags because it only lasted for 2 minutes. My dad, gallion, the leader of our nation, the giuoans, was very dissapointed in me when he found out i was planning to kill a clanbag, he told me i was too small and too weak, but i'd show him, i knew i could show everyone that i was not weak and i could fight. I waited for that day, it almost seemed interminable having to wait that long, until one very specific day came along, I was woundering through the alkaline woods when i saw a huddled group of clanbags sitting by a fire, i took out my potion and drank it, i grew big and strong. I felt good I felt like it was the perfect oppertunity i've been waiting for, I ran up to the clanbags and gave a blistering punch straight to the face of one of the clanbags. They were enraged after that. They fought back and captured me. I woke up the next day in a frozen waistland, what is this, it thought. I wanted to leave so bad but something was pulling me towards it, something i had never felt before. My heart pounded four times a skipped beat. My senses told me to run, so i ran, i ran as fast as i could to reach something, im not sure what yet, but soon i will find out.

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character): Brown hair, Brown shirt with buttons down the middle and an x on the back. Black belt and blue pants. Trent is ripped and has grey shoes.

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: To explore this new land and find a new home.

Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description):

[Brave_Taco]

Great story, just u need to upload your skin, i dont remember how but if saera or any of the other mods could help please? thank you

[Leech]

Minecraft Name: trenten4398
Previous RP experiences: yes, many
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: peanutcraft, it was shutdown
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: kiwiships
How did you hear about Kiwike: through brave_toaster34 my friend

Character

Character Name: Trent
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle): Icenfjord
Gender: male
Age: 21

General Background Information: Growing up as a small boy was hard, whenever the clanbags would attack i would always be the one who wasnt allowed to go outside and fight them. My dream was to go out and kill a fierce clanbag so i could brag to the whole nation that i wasnt weak, but i never had that chance. I knew one day i might get that special chance so i prepared for it. I created a potion that would make me big and strong, I would only use it when i was outside and fighting the clanbags because it only lasted for 2 minutes. My dad, gallion, the leader of our nation, the giuoans, was very dissapointed in me when he found out i was planning to kill a clanbag, he told me i was too small and too weak, but i'd show him, i knew i could show everyone that i was not weak and i could fight. I waited for that day, it almost seemed interminable having to wait that long, until one very specific day came along, I was woundering through the alkaline woods when i saw a huddled group of clanbags sitting by a fire, i took out my potion and drank it, i grew big and strong. I felt good I felt like it was the perfect oppertunity i've been waiting for, I ran up to the clanbags and gave a blistering punch straight to the face of one of the clanbags. They were enraged after that. They fought back and captured me, they took me to this new place I had never been before, I stood up and made a break for it, i dont know how this happended but there was no one at the gate to stop me so i got out clean. As i reached the outskirts of the clanbags terriotory i reached snow.

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character): Brown hair, Brown shirt with buttons down the middle and an x on the back. Black belt and blue pants. Trent is ripped and has grey shoes.

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: To explore this new land and find a new home.

Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description):

FTFY. You needed to replace YOURNAME with trenten4398

[trenten4398]

how do i change my name leech?

[Saera]

Your story is passable, but I'd also recommend a somewhat more unique goal for your character in Kiwike. And post at http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1135...ry13972356 if you have not.

[trenten4398]

I updated it, and since leech already posted my skin for me, is that okay? or do i have to do it myself

[Saera]

The skin is fine, but I do not see the update for the goal/objective.