Application: Seandragon123

[Seandragon123]

General

Minecraft Name:Seandragon123
Previous RP experiences: Kiwike 2.0, Faery Tale Online, ORPhan, Star Wars The Old Republic
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: Kiwike 2.0, Ragebarrel. Kiwike went down, Ragebarrel sucked.
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: I just like the server...
How did you hear about Kiwike: Bowser956

Character

Character Name:
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle): Icenfjord
Gender: Male
Age: 31

General Background Information: Lok-Zur is a Laltraz ( http://z13.invisionfree.com/ORPhan/index...owtopic=17 ) that crashlanded onto Kiwike along with Leech, details are in his bio (He tells me nothing.). Born and raised away from other Laltraz , Lok-Zur knows acts little of a true Laltraz. As an orphan for all his life, Lok-Zur learned to get around by hitch-hiking. Through this, Lok-Zur has gained many skills; Leadership, breeding, building and farming for example. Through his friendship with Leech, he will use his skills to be sucessful in society, like he always wanted.

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character): Lok-Zur has Laltraz features, but fails to dress as one. He wears overalls.

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: Lok-Zur wishes to set up a food industry and sell bread and meat at prices cheap.

Picture of your minecraft skin:

[Saera]

Your race description in the link is pretty good. But I hope you can elaborate on how you crash-landed on Kiwike with Leech, and what were you doing on Leech's ship in the first place. Give it enough information so that I don't have to refer to Leech's application to read the story.

Hopefully by then you'll have your skin fixed as well.

Until then, your application will be on hold.

[Seandragon123]

I don't know why it doesn't show my skin...
But I edited the bio.

[tcaillet]

You need to put your username where it said YOURNAME

[Seandragon123]

I did >_>

[tcaillet]

[Saera]

Your picture has been fixed. You'll have to make the background more convincing though. At least use complete sentences .

[Seandragon123]

Edited... again.

[Saera]

You'll be accepted for now then, since you are linked with Leech.