application forum- The1doctor

[theonedoctor]

General

Minecraft Name: the1doctor
previous RP experiences: Kiwike.se 2.0 i was on the server before Revamped besides that just Dungeons and Dragons i did once
Most interested Features in kiwike: well i like the whole nation idea and maybe want to start my own but what i really like is how much pride and effort is put into the server because i like dedicated employees to work on servers unless im just doing it to raid a bunch of people for fun.
How i heard about Kiwike: i heard from my best friend Thornax back before Kiwike Revamped and i am now applying for the server again

Previous Minecraft Experience: Kiwike.se 2.0 was actually my first server I played on. I've also played on another server called VGM I mainly did this to get good at PVP because this server is very hard core but i quit because the owners lack a sense of pride and would not care what happend to the server as long as they made money.

Spawn location(Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle): Icenfjord
age: unknown Ages are not kept or cared about so he has no idea
Gender:Male

General Knowledge: John Williams "the1doctor" was born somewhere during the winter season and is or was a mercenary from a country from the north. His family were murderd by a group of bandits and there on in he decided to get revenge. Later John managed to hunt down the bandit group and kept their swords and armor for trophies. After he got new armor and weapons he realized he was good at killing and became a gladiator and after his victory of using nothing but his hands against an opponent using a trident John found himself with many bodyguard and mercenary jobs and found himself happy but not satisfied with his life. Then one day he was hired to protect a philosopher and was paid very well and was thinking about buying a house. Then the philosopher was murderd in his room and John Williams was blamed for it because the room was ransacked and the thief used the John's sword to murder him and hid it making it look like John did it. He was able to escape jail and fled south in hopes of finding a new job and maybe become someone who everyone respects and not fear because of what he does. He does not have any family for a group of bandits came and murder everyone and he only survived by hiding that is why he became a mercenary. When he came to the country of Kiwike he was amazed and knew he can make a good living here.

Size: small?

Physical and mental condition: he is a brunet about 5 foot 7 not the tallest but he has broad shoulders. He enjoys learning new things like how to farm how to kill in new ways little things like that. He is also has very pale skin so he tends to burn.

Main objective: he wants to become of someone of power and respect.

Skin:

sorry i was having problems and could not do a picture so here is a link to the website i am going to use.

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[doggypwn]

Size as in height and width, proportions. Also, hello doc, good to see you're back. And rename the thread "Application - the1doctor"

We're also using a website called http://signaturecraft.us/ works well.

Also, skin link is broken on your application form.

[Saera]

You can omit the "size", that's going to go in your physical description of your character. Also, the age is meant for your character, not yourself. I think a 15-year-old mercenary is quite impossible.

The idea of your story is decent, but I'd suggest tidying up a little. You are also missing quite a bit of information:
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?:
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?:
How did you hear about Kiwike:

Character Name:
Gender:

I fixed your skin display.

[theonedoctor]

thx and did i do it better?

[Saera]

It'd be easier if you copied the format provided:
http://kiwike.se/forum/showthread.php?tid=2301

Background story seems good. But you are still missing some information. Again, copy/paste the format provided and simply fill it in. (don't overwrite your application)

[theonedoctor]

Size as in height and width, proportions. Also, hello doc, good to see you're back. And rename the thread "Application - the1doctor"

We're also using a website called http://signaturecraft.us/ works well.

Also, skin link is broken on your application form.

How on earth do i do the signature thingy! i made one and want to use it!

[Saera]

Decent story. Application accepted.

Welcome to Kiwike.