Application of World_Hopper

[World_Hopper]

General

Minecraft Name: World_Hopper
Previous RP Experiences: Lots of other Minecraft servers, DnD and some Rift.
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: Lots, yes. I left some cause they weren't suitable RP style, or I didn't like them, I'm still on 1 or 2 others.
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: The towns and the RP
How did you hear about Kiwike: browsing the Minecraft Forums

Character

Character Name: Talon Simow
Spawn Location: Icenfjord
Age: 24

General Background Information:Talon spent the first 4 years of life around the house staying with his mother and helping her out as he got a bit older. When he turned 8 his father started taking him out into the snowy woods and cutting trees, Talon loved being a logger so he started cutting down saplings and very small trees, or clearing the branches while his father cut down real trees. It wasn't too long until Talon was a well built, young man at the age of 15. He started going into the woods by himself, cutting down trees and bringing the lumber back to the house, when he turned 16, his father contracted a debilitating disease which left him at home in the bed.
Talon took care of his mother by selling the lumber he cut at the nearby village's market, they lived a few miles outside a village where wood was very scarce so they could make enough to live. He had to pull a cart into town once and 2 wolves attacked him on the road, pulling out his skinning knife, the only weapon he had nearby, he tried to fight them off but was overwhelmed. They tore at his young, strong body until he was almost dead. They left when a traveller came up with a torch, he didn't see Talon but he did see the wolves so he ran at them waving the torch. The man took Talon into town and nursed him back to health. It took him 3 months to recover, and he still wasn't totally normal. He thanked the man and quickly ran back to the house, it took him 2 days since he was still weak from his recovery. He got back to the house and found both his parents dead, they couldn't have survived and both died of disease.
He lumbered back into the village, going to the house of the man and working for him as a lumberjack for a few months, he worked harder then usual to try and take his mind off his parents death's. He thought it was his fault and he still does, it haunts him when he sleeps. He left the small village to go and try to make some coin in a nearby town and then start his own village, where he could push his dead parents away from his mind by leading the village.

Physical Condition/Description: Talon is a strong, young man, he's very fit from years of working the woods with an axe. He has shaggy brown hair with a small beard he's growing out. He wears a blue shirt with a leather vest over top and strong boots to keep his feet from being crushed by falling timber.

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: Talon has a desire to lead a small town, knowing the best lumber is cut there and he wishes for his village to be somewhat wealthy and popular.

Picture of your minecraft skin: http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/rich...he-seeker/

[Cerce]

Besides the excessive amount of commas, he appears to be pretty good with the background lore. I look forward to seeing Talon's little village, if he succeeds in his objective.

[World_Hopper]

Comma's are my friends

[Saera]

Fixed your skin display.

A very well done application. And you have posted it at minecraftforum, excellent!

Welcome to Kiwike.