Application - kampman

[kampman]

General
Minecraft Name:Kampman

Previous RP experiences:WoW,Garry's mod. Was told I abid by the rules quite well.

Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?:Yes, kiwike, before the revamp though I felt a break from minecraft was needed after a long time of playing it exclusively.

What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?:I think the territories are what I'm mostly interested in.

How did you hear about Kiwike:Well, I was a member before and heard of the revamp so I thought I would come back.

Character
Character Name:Mr.Roboto
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle): Icenfjord
Gender:Male (kind of)
Age:Unknown

General Background Information:Built by old dwarven mages to protect and serve. This last remaining cyborg has been programmed to protect all humanoids and abide by the three rules created by Issac Asimov. The dwarven mages first came to the land of kiwike when something with a portal went wrong...But before I should tell you the story of magic,sorrow and dwarves of course. There was once a very long time ago, a peaceful race, the dwarves, they thrived and lived in harmoney with all the creatures. Unfortunetly I, Mr. Roboto, failed to protect them once the creatures turned against them. They thought the dwarves were too powerful with their magic and machines. As a last line of defense they created me and went through the portal to seek protection far far away on kiwike but the portal was wrongly summoned and let them all straight to their deaths, straigh to...The Neather. I failed to protect them but was spared by the other creatures so that I would forever live with my guilt and restless mind. Years later I thought myself the arts of magic and teleported myself to kiwike. Unfortunetly the transportation damaged my memory and I do no longer have the knowledge of magic residing in my ancient crystal that you humans refer to as "brain". And so I seek shelter in kiwike hoping to help others to atone for failing to protect my master and his people.

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character):Humanoid cyborg with iron as the shell and with blue colored lights emitting a weak light from different places of his body.

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?:To fulfill my programming, protection of the human-isch race.

Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description):



If I missed something, please comment and tell me what I missed, Thanks in advance.

[Saera]

We'll need more than who built your character as a background.
Maybe start with describing the Dwarven mages, and how and why they built you. Also don't forget to include how he came to Kiwike.
And of course, in your goal is to fulfill your programming. Explain what was he programmed to do in the first place.

And I'm sure you have a physical description, or you wouldn't have a skin.

[kampman]

There I edited abit, please do tell me incase I need to further develope the background story or whatever

[Saera]

Its getting there. But you've missed a few points that I pointed out earlier. How did he come to Kiwike? A little more details about the Dwarven Mages.

Also, you can add more to your physical description. I'm going by how your skin looks like, so maybe "silvery metal with blue(?) lights emitting from the visor, chest and various locations around the body".

[kampman]

I made another effort, I do hope it is enough for you. Please tell me what your judgement is as swiftly as possible.

[Saera]

Looks good.

Welcome to Kiwike