Application- Dillpickle789

[Dillpickle789]

General

Minecraft Name: Dillpickle789
Previous RP experiences: Some other servers
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: Just looking for a new experience.
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: The new RP aspects
How did you hear about Kiwike: On minestatus

Character

Character Name: Troy
Spawn Location: Icenfjord
Gender: Male
Age: 98

General Background Information:
My name is Troy, It's been 98 years since my birth 78 since my death. I was born on kiwike, though I don't remember where or who my parents are. I don't know how I died, sometimes I see bright flashes and images of a past that I'm not even sure is mine... everyday I feel my mind slipping, I don't know how I am going to retain my mind much longer. With everyday the skin is rotting off my bones and my mentality grows weaker. How much longer do I have, I have to find help...I have..to...*groans*...
*Suddenly wakes up* Where am I. No! Not again, it's getting worse. How long did I lose myself. Where am I? Did I hurt anyone...there is blood on my hands...I have to find help before it's too late. I have to...
(Yup, he's a zombie but he still has his wits about him. At least somewhat, and he is desperately searching for a way to keep his last few shreds of humanity.)

Physical Condition/Description :
Rotting flesh, tattered clothes, some gruesome unclosed wounds.

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?:
To find a way to maintain his mentality.

Picture of your minecraft skin :

[Saera]

An interesting story. I like your writing style, though I'd like to see it more fleshed out. Maybe about what he was before he died, or does he not remember at all? Mmm the only thing you do need to add is how he ended up on Kiwike. Just a simple line for that will do.

Even a zombie has a description. Rotting flesh, bones showing beneath them, describe article of clothing, anything you'd like to take note of.

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Good good. All the pieces are falling in place.

Welcome to Kiwike.