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08-27-2012, 03:21, (This post was last modified: 08-28-2012, 22:22 by mecrurial9.)
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Application - mecrurial9
]Minecraft Name:mecrurial9
[i][u]Previous RP experiencesShockedld kiwike and tekkit
[i][u]Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?Shockedld kiwike and left for the revamp
[i][u]What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?:exploring and fighting
[i][u]How did you hear about Kiwike:my friend Xx_TheWaffle_xX

Character

[i][u]Character Name:Max Mecrurial
[i][u]Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle):Aridian Jungle
[i][u]Gender:Male
[i][u]Age:15

[i][u]General Background Information: Max Mecrurial is from a far of kingdom called Farkilot. He is part of a massive family that runs the kingdom. He lives with his many brothers and sisters. His father was the king and was getting very old. Farkilot was a very advanced kingdom that had special potions that made you live for a very long time. Max's father was 154 years old. he was on his death bed with the whole family around him. Max's father told the family a story about a far off land called Kiwike. He talked about the different nations and races of the land. The king said that whoever finds this land will be the king of Farkilot. He said that if you find it, you will know exactly why I sent you there. Those were his last words. The next day, the whole family went off to find the land of Kiwike. Many of Max's brothers and sisters died along the way of the journey. There were 5 left on the journey and it was late at night so they built a shelter. They didn't have any food for the night so they had to go get food with the monsters around. The five of them set out not too far from the little shelter. Fortunately, there had been some pigs and cows around there camp. Max had killed lots of pigs and cows and drifted away from the shelter. He was looking around to try and figure out which direction to go when he heard a hiss. There was a big explosion and Max was flung. He was unconscious on the ground when the rest of the family came to help him. When Max woke up, he didn't know who he was or how he had gotten to the camp. The family told him his name and everything that he lives for but max still didn't know why he was on the journey. The family didn't tell him because they wanted to be the king or queen of Farkilot. Max left the family the next morning because he claims he doesn't know them. Max walked for miles and miles until he came across some people that were wandering the land. They told him that they came from a land called Kiwike. The moment that the word Kiwike rolled of the tongue of the man, he got his memory back. He remembered everything about his dad and Farkilot and becoming the king. He asked the people which direction that Kiwike was. They said go east and you will see it. He thanked them and headed off at a fast pace. It didn't take long for Max to reach the land of Kiwike. He entered Kiwike in the Khulu Desert. Max knew there was something in Kiwike that his dad wanted him to find. Max felt very at home in the Khulu Desert.

[i][u]Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character):Max wears a nice robe with many layers of silk on top. It is a very nice piece of clothing. It has a white hood on top to cover his scars from the attack. He is strong and well built with large muscles.

[i][u]What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?:Max's main objective is to find what his father has sent him to find. Max wishes to make many new friends and to tell them about his history and story

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08-27-2012, 03:49,
Post: #2
RE: Application - mecrurial9
Wut? I'm confused.

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08-27-2012, 04:07,
Post: #3
RE: Application - mecrurial9
(08-27-2012, 03:49)bvcxzmn Wrote: Wut? I'm confused.

sorry about that. it glitched and didnt post my writing
08-27-2012, 04:42,
Post: #4
RE: Application - mecrurial9
(08-27-2012, 04:07)mecrurial9 Wrote:
(08-27-2012, 03:49)bvcxzmn Wrote: Wut? I'm confused.

sorry about that. it glitched and didnt post my writing

Oh, nevermind.

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08-27-2012, 05:07,
Post: #5
RE: Application - mecrurial9
It's original.. but the story doesn't quite make a lot of sense. It seems random and does not really have a flow to it.

Also, Kiwike isn't exactly a large city. It's a land.

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08-27-2012, 09:22,
Post: #6
RE: Application - mecrurial9
Well am I whitelisted though?
08-27-2012, 20:20,
Post: #7
RE: Application - mecrurial9
My previous comments kind of hint that you should improve on your story.

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08-27-2012, 21:01,
Post: #8
RE: Application - mecrurial9
(08-27-2012, 20:20)Saera Wrote: My previous comments kind of hint that you should improve on your story.


alright fine. i will redo it OriginalRage
08-28-2012, 20:42,
Post: #9
RE: Application - mecrurial9
Very much improved now.

Only thing left to do is post your application at http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1135...d__st__280

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08-29-2012, 05:44,
Post: #10
RE: Application - mecrurial9
Welcome to Kiwike.

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