10-24-2011, 17:46,
(This post was last modified: 10-24-2011, 18:14 by Spammuff.)
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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot
I will.... When it's perfect...
Edit: Grammar Nazi 1 is Reading it.
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10-24-2011, 19:43,
(This post was last modified: 10-24-2011, 19:43 by Unreal22.)
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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot
(10-24-2011, 17:42)Spammuff Wrote: Add me then, Unreal_Helol
Name stealer.... 
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10-24-2011, 20:02,
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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot
(10-24-2011, 19:43)Unreal22 Wrote: (10-24-2011, 17:42)Spammuff Wrote: Add me then, Unreal_Helol
Name stealer....
EvE = Unreal Reactionz
Frigging derpcake
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10-24-2011, 20:03,
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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot
Grammah Nazi 1 TEEHEE
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10-24-2011, 20:12,
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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot
(10-24-2011, 20:03)Saera Wrote: Grammah Nazi 1 TEEHEE
The talks in teamspeak were pretty much us two fighting over wording, and the English literature system
"Saera it's frigging present tense there"
"Spammy you even did it wrong with the present tense"
" 0.0 GODDAMMIT"
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10-24-2011, 22:48,
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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot
Hoi Spammy! You might want to look over the text a bit. You often confuse "your" with "you're". Otherwise I can't spot any significant grammar errors. But keep in mind that i've been very stressed out today. Something may have slipped my eye.
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10-24-2011, 22:51,
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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot
Don't worry. i saw that too, and party lectured me about the difference.
1/3 Stages Of proofreading complete.
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10-24-2011, 23:18,
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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot
(10-24-2011, 22:51)Spammuff Wrote: Don't worry. i saw that too, and party lectured me about the difference.
Thats good. It burned my eyes. 
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10-24-2011, 23:24,
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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot
Maybe it's a good thing you won't let me proofread...... Grammar nazi+ OCD=very scary combination sometimes.
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10-25-2011, 16:34,
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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot
Update: Didn't get much time to proofread scene two , due to a war vs Cicatrix....
I will do the rest today.
Update: Thanks to Partyars. Scene 2 is fully proof-read.
Time for Scene 3 (And then a release)....
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