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11-02-2011, 02:31,
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tristo999
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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot
Tristo be soooo exitied
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11-02-2011, 03:34,
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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot
so they need an army hmmm? You know... I happen to be the world's only noble mercenary captain 
You wot?
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11-02-2011, 03:52,
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Spammuff
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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot
Heh, I'm sure a leader will arise..
xD
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11-02-2011, 03:57,
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squiggley1
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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot
you can always use some extra men 
You wot?
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11-02-2011, 04:36,
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sethd13
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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot
SunSwirl opened his eyes, to Equestria and Canterlot. He knew where he was and Satrayah was stood with him, she was looking shadier and was twitching abit.
(08-21-2012, 03:16)Cerce Wrote: Molesting children is just a bonus.
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11-02-2011, 13:08,
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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot
Gotcha.
Tweaked that up a bit.
Update: I'm allowing two editors to join me in fixing the story.
There's gonna be alot of changing of the first two sheets, and alot of adding and moving.
Here's the thing i wasn't realizing how much i used commas and thus comma abuse is found alot in scene one and two.
"Scratch that, comma abuse EVERYWHERE"
Yes this is why we all hate commas.
(2 Day project working on fixing chapter one and prelude)
(3 Day project to work on fixing chapter two and one)
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11-02-2011, 18:57,
(This post was last modified: 11-02-2011, 19:00 by Spammuff.)
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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot
Grabbed photoshop today:
![[Image: 2eK72.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/2eK72.jpg)
Copyright Nix. All Rights Reserved © .
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11-02-2011, 20:03,
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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot
Image isn't showing up.
(10-14-2012, 06:21)sethd13 Wrote: 9/10 actually really liked that <3 party always has good music ![[Image: Kon-Signature-2.gif]](http://i564.photobucket.com/albums/ss89/JRendell21/Graphics/Kon-Signature-2.gif)
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11-02-2011, 20:04,
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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot
The comet is going to miss.
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11-02-2011, 20:08,
(This post was last modified: 11-02-2011, 20:09 by Spammuff.)
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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot
(11-02-2011, 20:04)Android Wrote: The comet is going to miss.
DONT POINT THAT OUT.....
Like I said, they just want a hug. Comet '&' Planet Love 4 life!
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![[Image: kLeN8.png]](http://i.imgur.com/kLeN8.png)
