Aktrjack application

[Saera]

It's getting better. But I don't think your character should go so far as to claim to have invented the sticky pistons. You can make up some other invention you may have. Also replace KiwiCollege with another name that has no tie with Kiwike, as it's making it assume that you've been in Kiwike all this time, unless I misunderstood something.

Also don't forget to mention how your character discovered and found his way to Kiwike.

Don't forget to post a reply after you edited so we can keep track of the applications.

[sethd13]

Fixed.

[Saera]

You're in then.

Welcome to Kiwike.