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the knight of darkness (WIP)
04-03-2012, 03:52, (This post was last modified: 04-04-2012, 19:04 by bonden.)
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the knight of darkness (WIP)
DAY 1 THOUSAND OF YEAR AGO
It all starts thousands of years ago were there was a king named Zultrix, who ruled over the large land Culvis , named after the greatest and most powerful king of all. The king Zultix wanted like all the others expands his empire and become as great and powerful as culvis, so he gatherd up his army and rode out to war.


DAY 2
In his army there where a man named Greytuck, he was one of the strongest and the most loyal knights Zultrix had. So after a days journey he sent for Greytuck to meet him at his tent, Zultrix had found a map months earlier. That would lead Zutlrix to something extrodinary and powerful, he wanted Greytuck to follow the map and find it and bring it back to him. they talked for hours and hours about the map and the object the map lead to. then Greytuck walked back to his tent to pack up his belongings and food for the journey.

DAY 3
early the next morning Greytuck rode away towards the object that he didnt know yet would change his life towards the bitter end of the so great life he had in the royal army. he rode over deserts and through jungles untill he finally found a cavern, he takes a break and sleep.

DAY 4
He looks on the walls out side the cavern and saw somekind of wierd writings and drawings. Greytuck tried and tried to understand what they said, but he wasnt that smart or wise to understand the wierd writings and drawings. he started to search for some materials to make a trouch so he could go into the cavern, after hours of searching he finally found everything he needed and started to go in. Greytuck walked and walked untill he saw it, the majestic gate to the objects chamber.

But just when he as going to open the gate he started to tremble and felt a cold breeze through out his whole body, almost like it was something that walked straight through him.

Greytuck didnt know what that was but he knew that it wasnt going to stop him. Greytuck gathered up all his Courage to open the door, as soon as the door opened a bright light shined through the cracks. The bright light blinded Greytuck, so he started to loose gourage to go inside when Suddenly he heard a wispering voice calling for him.

He didnt want to follow the voice but quiet the opposite to run away from it, but he couldnt he wouldnt move not even an ince somthing was controlling him. he began to freak out, he wanted to shout out for help but nothing wanted to come out from his mouth, then he felt a cold breeze again and his body started to move.

he began to freak out even more he tried to take over his body but nothing worked, the wispering voice he heard started to come closer and soon he could hear it perfectly. It said ouya reaa heta hosenca neoa(you are the chosen one) he didnt understand it but listens to the voice.

Ouya reaa heta hosenca neoa, ouya herewa hosenca ota ringba estructionda ota heta orldwa(you where chosen to bring destruction to the world). His body stoped moving and the voice disappeared, his hand moved up and grabbed the object.

He now felt the object in his hands it was a sword not a small sword it was big and heavy, he felt a tremendous pain in his body something he never felt before. Greytuck began feel the darkness filling up his mind, with destruction and bloodbaths. Greytuck could finally move his own body but he wasnt the man he used to be before going in to the cavern, he now only thirst for blood and destruction.

Greytuck cried out in pain ONA NEOA ILLWA VEREA EBA BLEAA OTA UNRA WAYAA ROMFA EMA, LLIA ILLWA ESTROYDA NDAA ILLKA LLAA HETA ARKNESSDA HALLSA EBA ICTORIOUSVA!!!(NO ONE WILL EVER BE ABLE TO RUN AWAY FROM ME, ILL DESTROY AND KILL ALL THE DARKNESS SHALL BE VICTORIOUS!!!).

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DAY 5-9
Greytuck continued to cry out in pain for several day untill there where no more suffering. He could then see more clearly, he could see all the blood and destruction right infront of him.


DAY 10
He went out side and jumped up on his horse and rode out, He could feel the power in his veins flowing all over his body, he became stronger and stronger the longer he hold the sword in his hand. Greytuck rode to the nearest waterhole to give his horse some water and satt down to coop with his new powers, the sworld talked to him over and over in his mind he now understood everything it said, he now believed everything it said, Greytuck became more and more insane and unstable and the power continued to rush into his veins, you could see his body starting to rot and his eyes fadeing away soon nothing but an unstable life force was left. he stood up and took the sword and drove it right into the horse and killed it. He was now all alone with his insane mind, he begun to run and run as fast as he could he ran straight for days untill he saw the war that he once was going to take part in, winning for his king zultrix.

DAY 14
but all he could see now was the blood on the fields and the destruction the war had made to the countries it had past through. he raised his sword in the air and cried out MIA REYTUCKGA HETA NIGHTKA FOA ARKNESSDA, OUYA REAA LLAA OINGGA OTA IEDA YBA YMA OWERSPA (im greytuck the knight of darkness, you are all going to die by my powers).


Soon everyone stopped fighting each other and stared up on the top of the hill, and they saw him a man dressed in black and grey armor with white hollow eyes. people started to panik, people tried to run away but Greytuck struck down with his sword right on the ground. the power from his blow was so destructive that the ground was cut in half, even after that the ground was still shaking no one could stand.

Greytuck took up his sword on the shoulder again and just stood and watched. Zultrix rose up and cried out to Greytuck, why are u doing this you who where my most loyal member in the royal army one i could allways trust, one wh o did anything for me and someone i would die for in war.

Greytuck shouts out MIA OTNA HETA AMESA ERSONPA IA NCEOA ASWA!!!( IM NOT THE SAME PERSON I ONCE WAS!!), and he strikes down with his sword again and kills Zultix, and all the others in the royal army of culvis. He strikes again and this time even the hill he stood on collapsed and he fell down. and got traped under 20000ton stone and lost his sword, buried 10000 m under the ground he now sleeps awaits somebody to find him so he once more can rise up and bring destruction to the world

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04-03-2012, 05:56,
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RE: the knight of darkness (WIP)
Dont we have a knights of Dusk already? ;o

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04-03-2012, 05:59,
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RE: the knight of darkness (WIP)
(04-03-2012, 05:56)tristo999 Wrote: Dont we have a knights of Dusk already? ;o

dusk ? im the knight of darkness cuz no one liked my pedocreeper so i made a new one
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04-03-2012, 06:27,
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RE: the knight of darkness (WIP)
(04-03-2012, 05:59)bonden Wrote:
(04-03-2012, 05:56)tristo999 Wrote: Dont we have a knights of Dusk already? ;o

dusk ? im the knight of darkness cuz no one liked my pedocreeper so i made a new one

nope, we already have knights of duck, you can be a knight of darkness or night but we kind of have a night of dusk...

You wot?
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04-03-2012, 06:36,
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RE: the knight of darkness (WIP)
(04-03-2012, 06:27)squiggley1 Wrote:
(04-03-2012, 05:59)bonden Wrote:
(04-03-2012, 05:56)tristo999 Wrote: Dont we have a knights of Dusk already? ;o

dusk ? im the knight of darkness cuz no one liked my pedocreeper so i made a new one

nope, we already have knights of duck, you can be a knight of darkness or night but we kind of have a night of dusk...

but im a knight of darknes not dusk xD
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04-03-2012, 12:43, (This post was last modified: 04-03-2012, 12:53 by StargateNerd.)
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RE: the knight of darkness (WIP)
(04-03-2012, 05:59)bonden Wrote:
(04-03-2012, 05:56)tristo999 Wrote: Dont we have a knights of Dusk already? ;o

dusk ? im the knight of darkness cuz no one liked my pedocreeper so i made a new one

Nobody likes the Knight of Darkness either... Troll
(04-03-2012, 03:52)bonden Wrote:
(NO ONE WILL EVER BE ABLE TO RUN AWAY FROM ME, ILL DESTROY AND KILL ALL THE DARKNESS SHALL BE VICTORIOUS!!!).

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04-04-2012, 12:52,
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RE: the knight of darkness (WIP)
hahaha stargate haha man your so funny
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04-06-2012, 08:03,
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RE: the knight of darkness (WIP)
((Sorry, but you totally just ripped off the KoD))
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04-06-2012, 08:04,
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RE: the knight of darkness (WIP)
((Not really... I doubt he even read about it.))

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04-06-2012, 12:45, (This post was last modified: 04-06-2012, 12:47 by bonden.)
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RE: the knight of darkness (WIP)
(04-06-2012, 08:03)guthriearmstrong Wrote: ((Sorry, but you totally just ripped off the KoD))

eee no i didnt
(04-06-2012, 08:04)geckosquid Wrote: ((Not really... I doubt he even read about it.))

((thx cuz i havent read about it and i havent ript it off i made this lore up and knight of darkness is nothing like knight of dusk not even the name is the same))
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