Application - Goregon23

[goregon23]

[php]General

Minecraft Name: goregon23
Previous RP experiences: Kiwike, Kiwike 2.0
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: The Vault RP which i only left because i became too occupied with studies and personal persuits
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: Appart from seeing old faces again? The territories sounds good and hopefully ill own my own airship one day.
How did you hear about Kiwike: Originaly from Al and Will (Yottabyte and android would know who im talking about)

Character

Character Name: Shen
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle): Khulu Desert
Gender: Male
Age: 21

General Background Information: Far into the east of minecraftia lies Fire country, a place where the people have connected with what is called ‘the will of fire’ which is the realisation and control of the fire element. Within the centre of this foreign land lies Hao Ling the village of fire, this is where Shen is born. Brought up through an ancient order of ninja dedicated to the protection of this land, Shen shown extraordinary talents before he was nearing his coming of age. There was however unrest when these features were shown as they felt a certain unease about him. Because of the village elders superstitions he was never allowed to interact with the other students of the order as they feared it could affect their learning capabilities. When it was time to travel on a pilgrimage to achieve enlightenment, he was sent to Hearts Peak an active volcano which is said to be a place of higher power and authority. Shen began his journey the next day but little did he know that he has been chosen as the beginning of betrayal.
After a week of traveling, he arrived at the summit and look within the volcano. A puff of smoke gushed upwards almost catching Shens face. When he looked again he saw a pair of purple eyes and a single limb reach out and grab him.
‘You show skills and such a young age, I can help attain more power. I’ve seen the way the treat you how they disregard you I however shall treat as an equal, a conduit of my power. Allow me to demonstrate…’
The hazy figures roared a purple fire that engulfs Shen, and solidifies him within a pale coloured stone and remained there for countless days. Time has passed and the stone has weakened, awaking Shen from his absorption of the power of The End. With a burst of force he breaks free of his holding and is greeted by the same figure that first held him.
‘I have now embedded you with a part of my soul, the soul of the Enderdragon. With this my powers can be used through you however in giving you this power you will be tasked with one duty.’
Shen looks into the figures eyes and shows him some kind of mysterious portal held in a stronghold.
‘This portal must be found and activated; it is only through this that my influence may truly spread in your world. But first you must destroy all evidence of your past. I want Hao Ling in my domain’
When the haze mentions his home town he shakes with anger, with a purple vengeance behind his eyes he simply replies ‘Yes, my new master’
Shen finally returns to the village but is surprised to see everyone celebrate his return. He felt lost in his emotions in finally feeling true happiness, but he suddenly remember and attempted to run. His dad stops him mid jump and guides him to the ground
‘Where are you going son? I know you’re ambitious to start out defending our town, but relax for now enjoy yourself’
‘Please you don’t understand I need to leave’
He looks at his dad with his eyes flaring with purple and a single tear of raw energy from The End drops from his face. Shens body became enveloped by the Enderdragons power creating a portal surge between the over world and The End, using Shen as the key. Buildings collapsed and absorbed, People condensed into a thick red mist and passed into the eternal darkness. Shen opened his eye and to his horror sees his father condensing. Bones breaking, skin tearing, eyes bursting while everything became small.
‘Son… I lov-‘
Everything stopped. Shen sits there crying while covered in the blood of his friends and his family while the last of what he truly known burn to ashes in front of him. He quivered as he tried to stand and simply walked away from the site. He sees himself as the master’s puppet, his cloak of shadows.
A year has passed since that day and Shens travels take him to the land of Kiwike. When he hears about a stronghold within its land, he became determined to find it and complete his masters will, so he may be free from his grasp. Shen sets his destination to Khulu Desert, not only to begin his search, but to escape his dark past. And to go into his darker future.

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character): Shen is an agile and healthy male who's appearance is masked by a ninja apprentice suit coloured blue

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: To one day release his master to take the overworld under his rule

Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description):

[geckosquid]

How did he come to Kiwike? Also, the third sentence in the general background is difficult to understand. And you used the wrong skin link, as well. You can find it in the application form.

[goregon23]

How did he come to Kiwike? Also, the third sentence in the general background is difficult to understand. And you used the wrong skin link, as well. You can find it in the application form.

Huo Ling was apart of the old Kiwike server, so in essense he never really 'came' to Kiwike he was always apart of it. To put it simply, he follows the Enderdragon like a god and i dont fully understand the skin link but ill edit it and see if it does anything different.

Edit: Yea that kind of didnt work and if you mean how did he get to the starting point then Shen travelled far and wide distances, attempting to find a mythical stronghold which is said contains a portal to The End. Upon using his last eye of ender he begun to lose hope until he saw a glow among the desert sands. He travels to the city hoping to pick up the trail once more.

[Saera]

Essentially, kiwike 2.0 doesn't exist. So you cannot use whatever happens on 2.0 as the baseline of your background story. Well you actually could use the same idea as long as you replaced the name Huo Ling with another and state that it is of a distant land like you suggested.

[TheCreator]

Ah, you silly moose you.

[geckosquid]

Saera is spot-on. Just incorporate that into your story, and you'll be good to go!

[goregon23]

Saera is spot-on. Just incorporate that into your story, and you'll be good to go!

Ok, thats that done hopefully its all good now?

[geckosquid]

Saera is spot-on. Just incorporate that into your story, and you'll be good to go!

Ok, thats that done hopefully its all good now?

One last thing: What do you mean by "he cast hao ling into his master's land"?

[goregon23]

Saera is spot-on. Just incorporate that into your story, and you'll be good to go!

Ok, thats that done hopefully its all good now?

One last thing: What do you mean by "he cast hao ling into his master's land"?

His master is the Enderdragon, and the Enderdragon lies in The End. So Hao Ling got cast into The End by using Shen as a conduit of his power.

[Saera]

Ah, you silly moose you.

What chu talking about you silly goose.

Also, I still see the mention of Kiwike and Huo Ling in your backstory. Unless the forum is derp and did not show me any changes.