application-doombotmecha (edited)

[doombotmecha]

General

Minecraft Name: doombotmecha
Previous RP experiences: a bit of Dungeons and Dragons
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: i've played on some of the reddit servers, but they were singularly crowded and plauged by greifing. this is my first time here.
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: kiwiships!! the idea of just picking up your house and flying off really intrigues me
How did you hear about Kiwike: From a friend; username Lostboy

Character

Character Name: Dominion Jack
Spawn Location: Icenfjord
Gender: male
Age: ageless

General Background Information: Jack is an ancient planeswalker who lost his power during the end of the last Kiwike plane. during Kiwike's previous incarnation, Jack sought the alchemical secrets of the nether, which could only be reached through a plane much like Kiwike. Unfortunately, the world was nearing the end of its days, and the research took considerable time. As the land self-destructed around him, he sacrificed nearly all of his considerable arcane power in order to hurl himself to the nearest non-apocalyptic plane (More specifications mean more power spent. It can take days to rest after teleporting to the nearest Inn).

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character): as a normal human, but with a shirt that mysteriously has stayed pristine despite brushes with dirt, clay, sand, fire, skeletons, water, and creepers.

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: Jack wishes regain the power he held in his former existence. He means to acheive this through alchemy, and is not above using others to pay the price, as per the rules of equivalent exchange. in addition, Jack is very interested in the potential of kiwiships for his experiments. He always takes the long view ,except when starving or in other mortal danger. He also views himself as above everyone else as to him they are still lesser beings. He may hoard gold, but normally can be found swiss-cheesing the planet in search of diamonds and obsidian for a nether portal. he will sometimes form alliances of convenience in order to achieve a common goal, but he never truly sees his "allies" as peers.

Mannerisms and Behavior Quirks: Jack generally uses long, convoluted sentences, but often switches to single-syllable words, all caps, and dreadful grammar when annoyed or in mortal danger (ex. GIT DOWN HAR!). his foreign accent means that he doesn't always sound out the "n" sound in words (irl reason: broken "n" key).

Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description): I'm not very good at coding, so i currently only use the default skin.

[Leech]

I'm not very good at coding, so i currently only use the default skin.

Wait, what?

[Saera]

We need more then just "I will roleplay as..". You need to create a role-play character and provide a background story (ie. his history/origin, experiences, important events, whatever that makes him become who he is) and most importantly how he got to the world of Kiwike.

Also provide any physical description of your character, or however you imagine he'd look like.

PS: Edited I'm not very good at coding either, but you can use a program edit skins, as simple as using ms paint (I use McSkinedit but there are others you can google for as well)

[doombotmecha]

We need more then just "I will roleplay as..". You need to create a role-play character and provide a background story (ie. his history/origin, experiences, important events, whatever that makes him become who he is) and most importantly how he got to the world of Kiwike.

Also provide any physical description of your character, or however you imagine he'd look like.

PS: Edited I'm not very good at coding either, but you can use a program edit skins, as simple as using ms paint (I use McSkinedit but there are others you can google for as well)

thanks, great feedback!

[Saera]

it's getting better. But I was hoping you'd omit the "I will roleplay as...". Doesn't sound fitting in a story. Also, you can't use the previous Kiwike as your background, since technically, it does not exists. You COULD say that YOUR land/world (different world/planet and whatnot) that died/self-destructed.

[Crashlander04]

I'm not very good at coding, so i currently only use the default skin.