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admiralfisen · (This post was last modified: 05-14-2012, 13:03 by admiralfisen.)

General

Minecraft Name: admiralfisen
Previous RP experiences: wow minecraft
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: minecaste nyancraft ef-clan
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: building
How did you hear about Kiwike: or11

Character

Character Name: fisen
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle): icenfjord
Gender: male
Age: 17

General Background Information: I grew up in a village, my hometown. My mom died by a heart problem and my dad wasn't the brightest. My uncle thought it would be best if I lived with him. Uncle pabeck taught me to take care of myself and hunt. One day he needed people for his clan so I joined him and the others . His brother had been killed and now pabeck leads them.
Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character): i have green t-shirt with some leather shoes light brown pants light brown hair

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: Make the clan succesful, and help them!

Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description):
[Image: admiralfisen.png]

Crashlander04 · 05-13-2012, 19:19,

Growed up with the stupid villagers indeed.

Ian25 · (This post was last modified: 05-13-2012, 19:20 by Ian25.)

admiralfisen Wrote:I growed up in a village .The villager learned me to be retarded until or11 came to save me from the stupid villagers.I dont remeber beeing a villager. or11 learned me how to be a enderman. one day or11 talked with ((harald1970))pabeck and pabeck told or11 about his clan or11 joined him.And when i got a little older i joined to

He did indeed...

Saera · 05-13-2012, 19:37,

Your story don't quite make sense. I suggest improving on the structure and grammar to make it a little more interesting.

Crazylol5 · 05-13-2012, 20:51,

admiralfisen · 05-13-2012, 21:05,

improved

Ian25 · 05-13-2012, 21:55,

I grew up in [insert name here], my hometown. My mom died [insert] and my dad wasn't the brightest. My uncle thought it would be best if I lived with him. Uncle [name] taught me to take care of myself and hunt. One day he needed people for his clan so I joined him and the others . His brother had been killed and now [name of uncle] leads them.

admiralfisen · 05-14-2012, 08:03,

improved

admiralfisen · 05-14-2012, 08:03,

improved

Saera · 05-14-2012, 17:07,

Thank you Ian.

And your story is better. Last thing to do is post your application at http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1135...d__st__120 and you will be whitelisted.