application - catmann

[catmann]

General

Minecraft Name: Catmann
Previous RP experiences: no
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?: Minecaste
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?: Rp
How did you hear about Kiwike: Or11

Character

Character Name: Richard Johnsen
Spawn Location (Khulu Desert, Orraku Fields, Icenfjord, Aridian Jungle): Icenfjord
Gender: male
Age: 19

General Background Information: My name is Richard Johnsen son of the great assasin warrior Fredrik Johnsen.He was one of the first in the assasins clan.He moved to the land of kiwike for a mission he got from the leader.His mission was to spy on there enemy, the Imperials.Imperial got very angry on the spying and attacked my fathers clan several times he died in the last attack.The clan assains won this war. I was young when my father died I grew up with only my mom. I loved to here my moms stories about dad.When i was 17 years old my mom gave me a special present, I opened the present and inside there was a samurai suit, it was blue, I kept it on everyday.Later that year i got a letter from a guy called Pabeck that i could take my fathers place in the assasins clan.And thats how i found the land Kiwike.

Physical Condition/Description (what do they look like, what do they wear, all physical elements of a character): a blue samurai suit that I got from my father

What is your character's main objective? What do they wish to gain out of this experience of living?: Too fight for his clan.

Picture of your minecraft skin (Should fit your character description):

[sethd13]

SHIT STORM ACTIVATE.
It could use some more substance, and maybe some imagination.

[Saera]

Yes, it'd need to have more details to it; more fleshing out needed. And too many ninja stories around already.

[sethd13]

Grammar helps as well. Just take it in a less ninja direction. Go samurai, viking, ANYTHING but ninjas.

[asdfasdflkjty911]

DUNA-DUNA-DUNA-DUNA! CAT-MAN!

Make your story a superhero who was lost on his way to save the great feline king.

[Crashlander04]

My dad died of several attacks from a ninja clan

Call me insensitive, but I LOL'd.

[catmann]

more samurai less ninja improved!

[Saera]

Switching 'ninja' with 'samurai' does not make the story any better. I meant to say come up with more details on the story. Like, Perhaps there is more backstory to your character than what you've written down. Be creative.

[catmann]

Improved

[Saera]

You just need to fix up on those grammar eh? And post your application at http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1135...ry13972356 if you haven't.