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10-24-2011, 22:48,
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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot
Hoi Spammy! You might want to look over the text a bit. You often confuse "your" with "you're". Otherwise I can't spot any significant grammar errors. But keep in mind that i've been very stressed out today. Something may have slipped my eye.

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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by MainDigger - 10-24-2011, 22:48

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