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RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot

Gotcha.

Tweaked that up a bit.

Update: I'm allowing two editors to join me in fixing the story.

There's gonna be alot of changing of the first two sheets, and alot of adding and moving.

Here's the thing i wasn't realizing how much i used commas and thus comma abuse is found alot in scene one and two.

"Scratch that, comma abuse EVERYWHERE"

Yes this is why we all hate commas.

(2 Day project working on fixing chapter one and prelude)
(3 Day project to work on fixing chapter two and one)

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[Story] The Tale Of Equestria, And Kiwike. - by Spammuff - 10-23-2011, 15:56

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by partyars - 10-23-2011, 16:22

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by tristo999 - 10-23-2011, 16:48

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Cell - 10-23-2011, 16:49

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by geckosquid - 10-23-2011, 18:44

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by squiggley1 - 10-23-2011, 19:10

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 10-23-2011, 19:33

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Crazylol5 - 10-23-2011, 21:33

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by squiggley1 - 10-23-2011, 19:47

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by DjFuzz - 10-23-2011, 20:49

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 10-23-2011, 21:18

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by MainDigger - 10-23-2011, 21:20

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 10-23-2011, 22:26

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by squiggley1 - 10-23-2011, 22:30

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 10-23-2011, 22:32

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Unreal22 - 10-24-2011, 10:39

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 10-24-2011, 05:16

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by geckosquid - 10-24-2011, 07:29

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by partyars - 10-24-2011, 09:10

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by loremaster96 - 10-24-2011, 08:49

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 10-24-2011, 12:52

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by loremaster96 - 10-24-2011, 14:21

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 10-24-2011, 14:22

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by loremaster96 - 10-24-2011, 14:23

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 10-24-2011, 14:33

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by MainDigger - 10-24-2011, 15:27

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 10-24-2011, 15:41

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by MainDigger - 10-24-2011, 15:45

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by MainDigger - 10-24-2011, 16:42

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 10-24-2011, 17:09

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by MainDigger - 10-24-2011, 17:33

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Cell - 10-24-2011, 15:58

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 10-24-2011, 16:22

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by MainDigger - 10-24-2011, 16:27

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 10-24-2011, 16:38

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by tristo999 - 10-24-2011, 17:13

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 10-24-2011, 17:23

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by tristo999 - 10-24-2011, 17:24

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 10-24-2011, 17:42

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Unreal22 - 10-24-2011, 19:43

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by tristo999 - 10-24-2011, 17:45

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 10-24-2011, 17:46

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 10-24-2011, 20:02

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Saera - 10-24-2011, 20:03

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 10-24-2011, 20:12

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by MainDigger - 10-24-2011, 22:48

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 10-24-2011, 22:51

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by MainDigger - 10-24-2011, 23:18

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by loremaster96 - 10-24-2011, 23:24

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 10-25-2011, 16:34

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by partyars - 10-25-2011, 19:31

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 10-25-2011, 20:15

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by squiggley1 - 10-25-2011, 22:35

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Saera - 10-25-2011, 21:01

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Unreal22 - 10-25-2011, 21:35

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 10-25-2011, 21:40

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 10-26-2011, 00:47

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by DjFuzz - 10-26-2011, 00:55

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 10-26-2011, 13:46

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by DjFuzz - 10-26-2011, 18:32

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by loremaster96 - 10-26-2011, 18:33

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 10-27-2011, 04:13

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by partyars - 10-27-2011, 08:37

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 10-27-2011, 15:20

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by tristo999 - 10-27-2011, 16:52

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by partyars - 10-27-2011, 19:37

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 10-29-2011, 02:19

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by partyars - 10-29-2011, 02:23

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 10-29-2011, 09:54

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by partyars - 10-30-2011, 00:18

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 10-30-2011, 00:23

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by tristo999 - 10-30-2011, 00:51

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 10-30-2011, 01:40

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 10-30-2011, 20:38

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by geckosquid - 10-31-2011, 06:51

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 10-31-2011, 07:57

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 10-31-2011, 22:59

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 11-01-2011, 20:58

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by sethd13 - 11-01-2011, 23:03

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by partyars - 11-02-2011, 01:35

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by tristo999 - 11-02-2011, 02:31

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by squiggley1 - 11-02-2011, 03:34

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 11-02-2011, 03:52

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by squiggley1 - 11-02-2011, 03:57

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by sethd13 - 11-02-2011, 04:36

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 11-02-2011, 13:08

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 11-02-2011, 18:57

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by partyars - 11-02-2011, 20:03

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Android - 11-02-2011, 20:04

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by squiggley1 - 11-02-2011, 22:27

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 11-02-2011, 20:08

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 11-03-2011, 09:36

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 11-03-2011, 16:08

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Android - 11-03-2011, 16:35

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 11-03-2011, 18:23

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by geckosquid - 11-04-2011, 07:32

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 11-04-2011, 13:09

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 11-04-2011, 21:36

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by partyars - 11-05-2011, 00:38

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by MainDigger - 11-05-2011, 07:26

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 11-05-2011, 13:05

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by Spammuff - 11-06-2011, 19:15

RE: [Story] The Tale Of New Canterlot - by geckosquid - 11-06-2011, 19:25

RE: [Story] The Tale Of Equestria, And Kiwike. - by Spammuff - 11-06-2011, 20:15

RE: [Story] The Tale Of Equestria, And Kiwike. - by asdfasdflkjty911 - 11-08-2011, 02:06

RE: [Story] The Tale Of Equestria, And Kiwike. - by partyars - 11-08-2011, 03:12

RE: [Story] The Tale Of Equestria, And Kiwike. - by Cell - 11-08-2011, 03:24

RE: [Story] The Tale Of Equestria, And Kiwike. - by partyars - 11-08-2011, 09:44

RE: [Story] The Tale Of Equestria, And Kiwike. - by geckosquid - 11-08-2011, 08:54

RE: [Story] The Tale Of Equestria, And Kiwike. - by Spammuff - 11-08-2011, 09:15

RE: [Story] The Tale Of Equestria, And Kiwike. - by Spammuff - 11-08-2011, 21:53

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RE: [Story] The Tale Of Equestria, And Kiwike. - by Spammuff - 11-09-2011, 03:24

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