(11-27-2011, 22:59)Android Wrote: You have that huge background story Cerce, where you were cast out and such, so take that, and put it directly before the day we're introduced to the world of Revamped,
Huge background story...? That's roughly 1000 words (909 to be exact), and less than two pages long.
I'm talking what made Cerce into what the character stands for now. Quite frankly, I'm not throwing 8 months of work in the garbage.
Take the wiki page on Cerantia - that's one day of me sitting down and typing some very quick references. It has over 2,800 words, and about 6 pages long. Cerce, himself... Let's see.
23,199 words. 37 pages. Of my adventures in Kiwike only, and how they changed and impacted the character. You are telling me to take that folder and throw it into the trash bin.
No.
"One can concentrate so closely on the words of a sentence that one thereby misses the meaning. As can happen in any area of life. You must never lose focus on the larger landscape."