He forced me...

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Welcome to Kiwike, JLML. I'll be calling you J, or possibly JL, which will sound like I'm calling you Jail.
I see that you know something of Lovecraft.

We're gonna be Grammar Nazis in this thread? Let me get my Grammar Nazi code and my Editor hat.

[Grammar Nazi]
Dafaq is a bronie?

@JLML: The reason people have trouble following your writing isn't because it's rambling, long, or lacking breaks, it's because it has awkward sentence structure and word choice.

For my post count to reach that level, it would require some level of focus and conscious prioritising of me to post here,

prioritizing.

Don't let any fishes posing as persons steal it from you.

"fish posing as people"
The only time you'd say "Fishes" is if you were referring to the constellation of Pisces.

It's all on the whim of the ones with the power to do that which we would be better of not knowing could be done.

off

Immortality by your description is thus not an achievable status, for to be immortal one must be indestructible. And not even the greater old ones are indestructible.
Therefore, they are neither all mighty not immortal. Although they are still immeasurably more powerful than most things in this universe, or perhaps the next.

almighty

P.S i have multiple peraonalities, hence sporadic abscences and occasional unexplained behaviour. Just throwing it out there.

personalities
absences
behavior (But I won't hold this one against you if you're from the UK. )

No Llewyn. Dagon as in the father of the Deep Ones.

He is a fictional work of Lovecraft. The creator of Fantasy/Sci-Fi Horror. Pretty much everything that has to do with the extraordinary within gaming, and in a lot of cases literature, is inspired by him.

Dagon is a fertility god, but no one remembers that Dagon.
Lovecraft is important, but he's hardly the root of fiction and creative ideas in either gaming or literature.

Amnesia is pretty much a complete rip off of one of his tales, put into game form with some differences here and there, and mixed with a couple of other stories.

rip-off

I think you forgot a "the" and an "s" somewhere in there. And a capitalisation of a letter. And there are always exceptions. After all, if I take an apple, disintegrate it and then reconstruct it with a different molecular structure including a high level of nitroglycerin, would it still be the best fruit? Well, obviously it would be the best fruit at blowing stuff up, but would it be the best fruit as far as eating it goes? <.<

capitalization
Also, it wouldn't be an apple anymore.

Hahaha, don't worry, if I become like him I will commit ritual suicide. Based on previous experience, that belongs to the less nice ways to die. So I'm not too inclined to do so again. But whatever. If I have to, I have to. Let's hope it doesn't come to that. Just... Don't hate me by association. 'Cause then I will be /sadface. And I don't like being /sadface. D:

don't

Hello. I think I might like you... Unless you become like that "friend" of yours, sirprize. If so, I will be forced to hate you as well. Hope to
See you about revamped or what ever map yotta and android force us to play.

see
Revamped
whatever

Huh. We'll see when I figure out how to do all that stuff and create that apple then, I guess. Who knows, maybe it will taste super-awesome, making it one of the most delicious deaths ever when your head gets blown up, making you, quite literally, killed by delicious. Then I have to try it as well. Because I love delicious deaths. They're so much more delicious than those bland, boring deaths I experience every once in a while from non-eating related causes. Like getting hit by cars. Or trees. Or rocks. Or anything that can hit my head, really. 'Cause if it can, sooner or later it will. Which is annoying. 'Cause dying can be a bit of a... Well... Not-too-comfortable experience. Thus, it's preferred to be a delicious death, as that makes it worth the not-too-comfortable experience.

well
not-too-comfortable

As a final note, the proper form of an ellipses is three single-spaced periods, like so: " . . . "
I could correct more, but I have others things to peruse today.
[/Grammar Nazi]

This thread makes my head hurt slightly.

I get worse from editing fanfiction.

As an aside, I like yellow apples.