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03-31-2012, 21:22,
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RE: Application- Red11
(03-31-2012, 20:43)Saera Wrote: It was quite captivating in the beginning, but then it trailed off at the end of the background story. And yes, I'd love it if you give more thought about the possibilities of Red finding his father.

Your application will be on hold until then.
Yeah, It would've been better at the end, but my bro got mad at me making it more "story" like. So I just made it simple. I'll rewrite it right now, and hopefully it'll meet your standards. Laugh

ME GUSTA! :MeGusta:
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Application- Red11 - by Red11 - 03-31-2012, 07:26
RE: Application- Red11 - by Sebiale - 03-31-2012, 19:22
RE: Application- Red11 - by Red11 - 03-31-2012, 19:41
RE: Application- Red11 - by Saera - 03-31-2012, 20:43
RE: Application- Red11 - by Red11 - 03-31-2012, 21:22
RE: Application- Red11 - by SharkRaptor - 03-31-2012, 21:23
RE: Application- Red11 - by Saera - 03-31-2012, 21:35

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