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Application -- lostboy
04-01-2012, 17:39,
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RE: Application -- lostboy
Background seems fine.
I would like a better description and objective tho.

Something about what clothing he wears. and a real goal.
You don't live for fun in that time. you live for fame, money, to get passed the day without getting killed.
So. you have to redo that


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Application -- lostboy - by lostboy - 04-01-2012, 16:32
RE: Application -- lostboy - by Naamandre3 - 04-01-2012, 17:39
RE: Application -- lostboy - by geckosquid - 04-01-2012, 23:32
RE: Application -- lostboy - by lostboy - 04-02-2012, 02:26
RE: Application -- lostboy - by geckosquid - 04-02-2012, 04:53

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