Application - or11

[Naamandre3]

Background is to short. explain some of his life before the crash and some of his duties or things he did on the ship.

Description also is not enough. You have to describe his clothing does he still have his space suit? does he wear other clothing once in awhile etc etc.

Main objective like other. I do not think you're character does this out of charity he'll have a goal. to go back in space? to be famous in this new world. He already is a engineer and thus cannot strive to become one. so that needs a cleanup aswell