Application - Solion

[Solion]

the thing i do want you to change is his goal. We all want to find or create himself. but he must have something practical goal at hand which is not that long term. Build a house meet people. find a way to deal with his blindness something to keep him busy while working towards his 'end' goal

I agree, I had trouble saying just that but his
long term goal is definitely to remember who he was. His short term goal is to learn as much as he can about Kiwike by exploring the land and meeting people.

Although he doesn't fully remember what his life was like before, he feels a need for
companionship that most likely stems from his early life. So right now he will be trying to find
civilization and find some short term purpose, such as meeting others and helping them.

Thank you for the criticism, it's appreciated.