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04-02-2012, 22:18,

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RE: Application - crushrush

Very good, solid background. The only thing I'd recommend is rethinking about how your character got to Kiwike, rather than just "stepping into the world of Kiwike". One does not simply step into Kiwike (sorry I had to, please forgive me).

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Application - crushrush - by crushrush - 04-02-2012, 22:10

RE: Application - crushrush - by Saera - 04-02-2012, 22:18

RE: Application - crushrush - by crushrush - 04-02-2012, 22:21

RE: Application - crushrush - by Saera - 04-02-2012, 22:24

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