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Pixel's Royal Application
04-03-2012, 02:44,
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RE: Pixel's Royal Application
You ended your background story with "he live in the woods". You did not continue on how he came upon Kiwike. You could simply add "He decided to move further away, and on his journey he stumbled upon a new land..." or the likes.

Once you do that you'll be whitelisted.

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Pixel's Royal Application - by Pixel - 04-01-2012, 00:10
RE: Pixel's Royal Application - by Android - 04-01-2012, 00:22
RE: Pixel's Royal Application - by Pixel - 04-01-2012, 00:26
RE: Pixel's Royal Application - by Saera - 04-01-2012, 00:37
RE: Pixel's Royal Application - by Pixel - 04-01-2012, 00:38
RE: Pixel's Royal Application - by yottabyte - 04-01-2012, 00:48
RE: Pixel's Royal Application - by MainDigger - 04-01-2012, 11:00
RE: Pixel's Royal Application - by Pixel - 04-01-2012, 23:59
RE: Pixel's Royal Application - by Saera - 04-03-2012, 00:30
RE: Pixel's Royal Application - by Pixel - 04-03-2012, 01:13
RE: Pixel's Royal Application - by Saera - 04-03-2012, 02:44
RE: Pixel's Royal Application - by Pixel - 04-03-2012, 03:15
RE: Pixel's Royal Application - by Saera - 04-03-2012, 03:22

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