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04-04-2012, 02:23, (This post was last modified: 04-04-2012, 02:26 by Saera.)
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RE: application forum- The1doctor
You can omit the "size", that's going to go in your physical description of your character. Also, the age is meant for your character, not yourself. I think a 15-year-old mercenary is quite impossible.

The idea of your story is decent, but I'd suggest tidying up a little. You are also missing quite a bit of information:
Have you played on any other servers? Why did you leave?:
What feature of Kiwike are you most interested in?:
How did you hear about Kiwike:

Character Name:
Gender:

I fixed your skin display.

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RE: application fourm - by doggypwn - 04-04-2012, 01:50
RE: application fourm - by theonedoctor - 04-04-2012, 03:27
RE: application forum- The1doctor - by Saera - 04-04-2012, 02:23
RE: application forum- The1doctor - by Saera - 04-04-2012, 03:21
RE: application forum- The1doctor - by Saera - 04-04-2012, 03:59

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