I have to say interesting how you worked the lore into you're characters background.
Or it just happens to cross in several ways.
By any means its a good application.
The only question i have is he seems to be born in kiwike.
And if, what community? and what townsfolk seeing there are no towns or cities just a gathering of people minding there own things and mostly meet for trading, so i would you to shed some light on that aspect.
for the rest its fine.
Give a message here when its updated and i'll look through.
And more then likely accept you then,
The other thing i would like to ask if if you could copy over you're application to the minecraft forums.
The link being:
http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1135...ances-124/
Its more for show then anything but it shows people on minecraft we are actively getting people, and gives them examples to read and see what we like to call our player base
