application - clobber1

[Naamandre3]

General background is to short and needs to be longer.
Where is denholms, what does it look like? What race is he denholms doesn't sound to human. why is he grumpy what caused it, why did he come to kiwike to find happiness. there's alot of things missing here.

You also don't have a picture of you're minecraft person.
you should add that in using the format given in the application sheet